
7/15/2005 c6
2Georgia Logan
Hey, all your stories are really pleasant- I can'tt hionk of a better word to describe them, i like them a lot.

Hey, all your stories are really pleasant- I can'tt hionk of a better word to describe them, i like them a lot.
4/11/2004 c6
21WiredCrazyFrances
all the usual, great writing, uplifting...the whole deal...one thing, the word you're looking for is lose, not loose (i know, easy to confuse) other than that the writing is really good as always...aww, i'm sad that this is the last one, *sniff* It's been a great journey lol...keep writing...maybe check out some of my stuff, i'd really appreciate anything you could review...if not that's ok too...anyways good work and it's a great compilation of stories!

all the usual, great writing, uplifting...the whole deal...one thing, the word you're looking for is lose, not loose (i know, easy to confuse) other than that the writing is really good as always...aww, i'm sad that this is the last one, *sniff* It's been a great journey lol...keep writing...maybe check out some of my stuff, i'd really appreciate anything you could review...if not that's ok too...anyways good work and it's a great compilation of stories!
4/11/2004 c5 WiredCrazyFrances
as i've said again and again good work. I really like happy endings *silly grin* anyways yeah...good job and great writing!
as i've said again and again good work. I really like happy endings *silly grin* anyways yeah...good job and great writing!
4/11/2004 c4 WiredCrazyFrances
i really liked this one too, the characters are very well developed in such a short space, really good work on this!
i really liked this one too, the characters are very well developed in such a short space, really good work on this!
4/11/2004 c3 WiredCrazyFrances
aww, i really liked that one...i love the innocence of the girls...good work again!
aww, i really liked that one...i love the innocence of the girls...good work again!
4/11/2004 c2 WiredCrazyFrances
this short story was cute and uplifting...it would be interesting to see it expanded but i understand the whole school assignment thingy, just a suggestion if you do expand this one, explain a little bit more about tElizabeth and her husband's relationship...i like it though...
this short story was cute and uplifting...it would be interesting to see it expanded but i understand the whole school assignment thingy, just a suggestion if you do expand this one, explain a little bit more about tElizabeth and her husband's relationship...i like it though...