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4/12/2004 c1 Piquit
Oh, spooky! And kinda gross!
I meant to say that that was actually pretty good. I guess that was the ending, ne?^^
I think this could've worked as a bit longer story, too. It would've been great if the characters' would've had a bit more personality, so it would actually make the reader _care_ about what happens to them. Now it's just a bit like, "Oh, what? Some guy called Peter dying now. Who's he and who's Gordon and where did he go? Why should I care?"
I do like the future New York Times -takes there in the middle. While not actually that realistic, they still make a good effect.
It is a good story alright. Stephen King-ish, or something like that.^^;
1/4/2004 c1 46Olusenka
Oh my, that was quite chilling.
You have very good grotesque descriptions and an interesting concept. It would be nice if the story was a little longer, but I like it the way it is.
Good job and keep writing~
1/3/2004 c1 4freakle-face
Can this story be any more interesting? I think I had my jaw dropped the whole entire time. Good job on the creativity and the choice of words. Please continue this story, and if it's already ended make a sequal because that was very good.

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