for Open Shadow2/14/2004 c1 Melissa Lea Night
i like the phrase open shadow and i like the main part "on a day you were unhappy..." i find it interesting that the person was unhappy during a sunny day, which most poems it seems has people saddened during gloom or darkness.
"trying to fight darkness without touching it." this one is my fave line, i think it's verry fitting.
i like the phrase open shadow and i like the main part "on a day you were unhappy..." i find it interesting that the person was unhappy during a sunny day, which most poems it seems has people saddened during gloom or darkness.
"trying to fight darkness without touching it." this one is my fave line, i think it's verry fitting.
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