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2/14/2004 c1 Melissa Lea Night
acutally i think it is right. i like how you use the wording flying though amber, it's nothing you hear usually. and i think your right, it reflects hope.
"my cage is a world of morning light." very nice.
"but at least i have my wings outstrethched" shows that even thought some things might be not the best, you still have good things happening? i like this line, it sticks out.
1/26/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
Beautiful...Love the whole idea.
1/3/2004 c1 54Werecat99
*my cage is a world of morning light.* Somehow this image reached srtaight into my heart.
Beautiful poem.
1/3/2004 c1 44Simon James
hey , i really like this. it a brilliant idea - i mean the image of the fly on a constant unmoving journey thruogh time in the amber - even if you don't feel the poem is not quite right.
'holding me up, holding me down, my cage is a wolrd of morning light' i love that, you dont tend to think about what the fly sees - and that would be EVERYTHING the colour of amber!
Nice one, keep writing
Simon

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