for Original Wife1/21/2012 c1 angkay81
Hello! Im interested of reading your Original Wife story. Hope I can get to read it soon. Have a nice day.
Hello! Im interested of reading your Original Wife story. Hope I can get to read it soon. Have a nice day.
3/27/2009 c10 ChibiRomanticClown
I have to say no matter how many times I've read this story the more I love and it will always be my favorite. Please keep up the great work.
I have to say no matter how many times I've read this story the more I love and it will always be my favorite. Please keep up the great work.
12/22/2008 c10 
5Fayre Meira
I hope you're published. You write such wonderful stories! They could do with some editing - but they're a joy to read just the way they are as it is anyway.
thanks so much for posting them up - I'm all smiles because of them.
love,
Rills
5Fayre MeiraI hope you're published. You write such wonderful stories! They could do with some editing - but they're a joy to read just the way they are as it is anyway.
thanks so much for posting them up - I'm all smiles because of them.
love,
Rills
11/4/2007 c1 1lesleydevon
wow.
im suprised this story hasnt gotten more reviews.
i like where its going.
1lesleydevonwow.
im suprised this story hasnt gotten more reviews.
i like where its going.
8/30/2007 c10 Strangely Natural
This was actually quite good, covered the bases well, with appropriate drama.
This was actually quite good, covered the bases well, with appropriate drama.
7/19/2006 c1 jen
this story seems really good but you introduced both the characters too quickly for real story development. the conflict is already out in the open. if you're planning on writing another story, the pacing would fit much better if you introduce the first main character and give subtle insight into the life of that character, and then introduce the next character.
this story seems really good but you introduced both the characters too quickly for real story development. the conflict is already out in the open. if you're planning on writing another story, the pacing would fit much better if you introduce the first main character and give subtle insight into the life of that character, and then introduce the next character.
7/23/2005 c10 dOrKy-GuRl03
hey girl...that was such a good story to read...so loving it...can't believe that its the ends of the story..though...
hey girl...that was such a good story to read...so loving it...can't believe that its the ends of the story..though...
6/1/2005 c10 emerald
that was aw! those two kids are so fantastic...i hope you write a sequel to this...i would love to read something about the brothers love-story...and the plot was great and believable...this totally needs to get published!
that was aw! those two kids are so fantastic...i hope you write a sequel to this...i would love to read something about the brothers love-story...and the plot was great and believable...this totally needs to get published!
5/31/2005 c10 14RinaJewelz
aw..so sweet! really liked it, oh and i 4got 2 review hidden woman, but i realli liked that one too!
14RinaJewelzaw..so sweet! really liked it, oh and i 4got 2 review hidden woman, but i realli liked that one too!
2/27/2004 c10 fire-fem
I just finished reading this story and I love it! I think that Stacy and Graham are both great characters and your writing definately highlights the chemistry between them. I love your style, length and ideas! Keep writing! You are really very good!
I just finished reading this story and I love it! I think that Stacy and Graham are both great characters and your writing definately highlights the chemistry between them. I love your style, length and ideas! Keep writing! You are really very good!