for Her Mind Stolen1/13/2006 c5 
7fallingautumnleaves
I don't know, but you kind of seem to be rushing into everything a bit. I still can't wait until the next chapter.
7fallingautumnleavesI don't know, but you kind of seem to be rushing into everything a bit. I still can't wait until the next chapter.
12/24/2004 c1 Rebecca
Adrienne, this is awesome! Definitely continue with it!-Becca
Adrienne, this is awesome! Definitely continue with it!-Becca
9/18/2004 c3 20Bigfoot111
it's an ok start... interesting idea at the begining but then the story kind of seemed to change
ciao
20Bigfoot111it's an ok start... interesting idea at the begining but then the story kind of seemed to change
ciao
7/16/2004 c3 4Neveah Snow
awesome! your writing style is really great. This was a really fun read! I look forward to reading more from you!
4Neveah Snowawesome! your writing style is really great. This was a really fun read! I look forward to reading more from you!
7/16/2004 c3 2Myrddin's Apprentice
um... wow. You have an absolutely *wicked* writing style, and Sam is a col character. "Only thirteen and already on the road" is -such- a cool line!
Cheers!
~an elf named Glissa~
2Myrddin's Apprenticeum... wow. You have an absolutely *wicked* writing style, and Sam is a col character. "Only thirteen and already on the road" is -such- a cool line!
Cheers!
~an elf named Glissa~
1/6/2004 c2 169Siberia82
What a surreal chapter. Her parents don't seem to be very bright people. It feels everyone but the narrator is crazy. I hope she escapes!
I have one little suggestion: you should remove the actions that are in between asterisks. I find that they don't add to your story, and they only interrupt the flow of my reading.
P.S. I spotted an error; it's "You're home" not "Your home".
169Siberia82What a surreal chapter. Her parents don't seem to be very bright people. It feels everyone but the narrator is crazy. I hope she escapes!
I have one little suggestion: you should remove the actions that are in between asterisks. I find that they don't add to your story, and they only interrupt the flow of my reading.
P.S. I spotted an error; it's "You're home" not "Your home".
1/5/2004 c1 Siberia82
Wow, this is so cool! You have quite an imagination with soul transfers and dolphins. I'm at a school right now, and my class is going to start soon, but I'll defintely check Chapter 2 out sometime later.
Wow, this is so cool! You have quite an imagination with soul transfers and dolphins. I'm at a school right now, and my class is going to start soon, but I'll defintely check Chapter 2 out sometime later.