for Discontented7/29/2004 c21 lonelywriter09
Ok, I'm reading Discontented, and it's really good and all, but WHERE DID THE PIXIE GO! I went to your list of stories and the PIXIE IS GONE!
Ok, I'm reading Discontented, and it's really good and all, but WHERE DID THE PIXIE GO! I went to your list of stories and the PIXIE IS GONE!
7/23/2004 c25 bobae
great story! just zoomed through the whole thing. i loved how jake was such a steady character. and one of those mysterious kind of kids. good work.
great story! just zoomed through the whole thing. i loved how jake was such a steady character. and one of those mysterious kind of kids. good work.
7/22/2004 c25 
8InsaneOleander
That was a really, really good ending. It's not a fairytale ending where all the characters get everything they want and live happily ever after. That was a great story!
8InsaneOleanderThat was a really, really good ending. It's not a fairytale ending where all the characters get everything they want and live happily ever after. That was a great story!
7/21/2004 c25 chakun
wai! it so~ so~ amazing! i like it! you're really amazing! great plot + great writing! you're writing is so great it makes me want to smack you coz you're so damn god! ^_^ wa! jake is so cool!
wai! it so~ so~ amazing! i like it! you're really amazing! great plot + great writing! you're writing is so great it makes me want to smack you coz you're so damn god! ^_^ wa! jake is so cool!
7/20/2004 c25 WildWatermelon
Well, I'm kind at a loss for words since it is around 1:30 in the morning so here goes my half-assed review. The story was utterably cute and right about now, Jake is on the same level on Jude but even higher because he is so uberly cute. God, why are the good men fiction? LOL. I am currently discontented with my life too. Maybe I can find a guy to help me sort it out although it's nowhere near as bad as Kats. My mother annoys the hell out of me though and my dad is on a trip right now, leaving me with her for two whole weeks. I have no direction in life and am sort of pathetic. Lol, nowhere near, right? All in all, I like this story, very cute. Heh, maybe I wasn't at a loss for words after all.
-Anne
Well, I'm kind at a loss for words since it is around 1:30 in the morning so here goes my half-assed review. The story was utterably cute and right about now, Jake is on the same level on Jude but even higher because he is so uberly cute. God, why are the good men fiction? LOL. I am currently discontented with my life too. Maybe I can find a guy to help me sort it out although it's nowhere near as bad as Kats. My mother annoys the hell out of me though and my dad is on a trip right now, leaving me with her for two whole weeks. I have no direction in life and am sort of pathetic. Lol, nowhere near, right? All in all, I like this story, very cute. Heh, maybe I wasn't at a loss for words after all.
-Anne
7/19/2004 c25 8Niccy
I absolutely LOVED and ADORED this story..! It's just after midnight now and I had originally gotten on to get started on my Chem and Maths hw. Haven't quite started that yet, but I will... eep. I'm screwed.
Anyway, I loved this story (I think I mentioned that already..) and I just wanted to say that I think , no.. make that I KNOW you're an amazing writer and should keep up all the great work that you've been doing.
~d.fox (can't wait to read more)
8NiccyI absolutely LOVED and ADORED this story..! It's just after midnight now and I had originally gotten on to get started on my Chem and Maths hw. Haven't quite started that yet, but I will... eep. I'm screwed.
Anyway, I loved this story (I think I mentioned that already..) and I just wanted to say that I think , no.. make that I KNOW you're an amazing writer and should keep up all the great work that you've been doing.
~d.fox (can't wait to read more)
7/17/2004 c25 pillowfighter
i love your writing style!
U write incredibly well it makes me want to cry!
I just didn't like how Kat's mom got married to Baz tho... it sorta reminded me of that song..'Stacey's Mom' i think.
*shudders* but its funny all the same.
i liked how you make Kat so blunt and straightforward and i could empathize with her on her view on customers at Quick and Stop..I feel like killing them also!
Anyhow continue to write coz ure damn good.
-tnp
i love your writing style!
U write incredibly well it makes me want to cry!
I just didn't like how Kat's mom got married to Baz tho... it sorta reminded me of that song..'Stacey's Mom' i think.
*shudders* but its funny all the same.
i liked how you make Kat so blunt and straightforward and i could empathize with her on her view on customers at Quick and Stop..I feel like killing them also!
Anyhow continue to write coz ure damn good.
-tnp
7/15/2004 c25 9majykwolfe
I hope you write a sequel to this story. I want to know what happens when they all go to college. Do they stay together? Does Kat ever find out about Jake or does he remain a mystery? :)
9majykwolfeI hope you write a sequel to this story. I want to know what happens when they all go to college. Do they stay together? Does Kat ever find out about Jake or does he remain a mystery? :)
7/15/2004 c25 20safelysound
Woohoo! Have you noticed, you women characters are always quite angry? And the boys seem to be all calming and hot and... just... *melts*
20safelysoundWoohoo! Have you noticed, you women characters are always quite angry? And the boys seem to be all calming and hot and... just... *melts*
7/12/2004 c25 samantha
i love your story cause its so...understandable. youre a good writer too. I hate when you try to read a story and it has a pretty good plot but the writing stinks.
I've read another of your stories and i was wondering if you get your stories from you cause they start with hating (or at least thinking you do) a guy and end with loving him.
I think its funny that the girl has brown curly hair in this and in hello kitty because i do and they remind me of my self so i can really relate to the people but not so much their situations.
I just really wanted to say that i like your stories and you should keep writing.
i love your story cause its so...understandable. youre a good writer too. I hate when you try to read a story and it has a pretty good plot but the writing stinks.
I've read another of your stories and i was wondering if you get your stories from you cause they start with hating (or at least thinking you do) a guy and end with loving him.
I think its funny that the girl has brown curly hair in this and in hello kitty because i do and they remind me of my self so i can really relate to the people but not so much their situations.
I just really wanted to say that i like your stories and you should keep writing.
7/7/2004 c8 Tk. DuVeraun
*blinks* ...I'm getting a very Keiko-Yusuke feel from their relationship... (it'a anime, so don't ask...)
*blinks* ...I'm getting a very Keiko-Yusuke feel from their relationship... (it'a anime, so don't ask...)
7/7/2004 c6 Tk. DuVeraun
I think that I should be mildly insulted about the anime comment, but I'll let it slide this time...Maybe...
I think that I should be mildly insulted about the anime comment, but I'll let it slide this time...Maybe...
7/7/2004 c25 1Shez
wow
that was a really sweet ending, but i must admit that a sequel would be lovely (hint), where we get an insight into jake and see kat go to art collage and stuff.
1Shezwow
that was a really sweet ending, but i must admit that a sequel would be lovely (hint), where we get an insight into jake and see kat go to art collage and stuff.
7/6/2004 c1 Ange
Damn! that was awesome! love it. you should try to make it into a book or sumthin. and write a sequel. perty please? i bet it would be just as awesome as this one.
Damn! that was awesome! love it. you should try to make it into a book or sumthin. and write a sequel. perty please? i bet it would be just as awesome as this one.