for Discontented3/28/2004 c25 k
well i guess i can leave a review. umm loved the story alot. that was a great ending but it was the end so im depressed gotta find another story fast. hehe well anyway i guess thats it.
well i guess i can leave a review. umm loved the story alot. that was a great ending but it was the end so im depressed gotta find another story fast. hehe well anyway i guess thats it.
3/28/2004 c25 Oiseau Rouge
Wow! I think that was your best chapter of the whole story. And while it was awesome i'm going to miss the story. Hurry up and start a new one lol.
Wow! I think that was your best chapter of the whole story. And while it was awesome i'm going to miss the story. Hurry up and start a new one lol.
3/28/2004 c25 Midnight Owl
Oh my gosh, it's over! That's so sad... and it's kind of pathetic how you've ended two stories before i've even gotten to the major parts of Gypsie. Ahem... my bad. LoL. I want to apologize for my last review... i know i said i was gonna update yesterday but i wrote the chapter and it totally sucked ass. so i had to rewrite it... which i'm doing now... and i had to get working on that science paper. this was such an awesome ending because, you know, her problems didn't just GO AWAY. it would sort of have sucked if everything had just... gotten better. You know? Anyways, this has been an awesome story. I was rereading Diva Pixie and i was wondering if you might be interested in writing a one-parter about how they met. LoL. You don't have to... just a friendly suggestion.
You know how i told you i was totally into the beach boys? i've been listening to this one song 'be true to your school' and it totally makes me want to go back to the fifties where guys give girls letterman jackets and sigh surfer guys making awesome music. don't you just wish it was like that? or maybe that's just me. lol. quite possible. anyways, i was wondering which 'cure' cd's you have? i wanted to get kiss me, kiss me, kiss me but i wasn't sure... anyways...
sigh... it's over. it's over. it's over. that's so sad. but you always wrap your stories up really well. oh... did you know that there's a Clash DVD? i didn't! i just saw an add for it and i'm like WHOA! i'm definitely going to order it or buy it or something. anyways, i hope i made a good enough end review... super story, super chapter... i hope you upload something new soon!
Oh my gosh, it's over! That's so sad... and it's kind of pathetic how you've ended two stories before i've even gotten to the major parts of Gypsie. Ahem... my bad. LoL. I want to apologize for my last review... i know i said i was gonna update yesterday but i wrote the chapter and it totally sucked ass. so i had to rewrite it... which i'm doing now... and i had to get working on that science paper. this was such an awesome ending because, you know, her problems didn't just GO AWAY. it would sort of have sucked if everything had just... gotten better. You know? Anyways, this has been an awesome story. I was rereading Diva Pixie and i was wondering if you might be interested in writing a one-parter about how they met. LoL. You don't have to... just a friendly suggestion.
You know how i told you i was totally into the beach boys? i've been listening to this one song 'be true to your school' and it totally makes me want to go back to the fifties where guys give girls letterman jackets and sigh surfer guys making awesome music. don't you just wish it was like that? or maybe that's just me. lol. quite possible. anyways, i was wondering which 'cure' cd's you have? i wanted to get kiss me, kiss me, kiss me but i wasn't sure... anyways...
sigh... it's over. it's over. it's over. that's so sad. but you always wrap your stories up really well. oh... did you know that there's a Clash DVD? i didn't! i just saw an add for it and i'm like WHOA! i'm definitely going to order it or buy it or something. anyways, i hope i made a good enough end review... super story, super chapter... i hope you upload something new soon!
3/28/2004 c25 
21WiredCrazyFrances
oh wow, i'm so sad it's over, but that was a really good way to end it. You should be proud of that chapter...i wish that i could write a dialogue that was that deep...maybe you can check out my story and give me a few suggestions...anyways it was really good, the whole story was awesome!
21WiredCrazyFrancesoh wow, i'm so sad it's over, but that was a really good way to end it. You should be proud of that chapter...i wish that i could write a dialogue that was that deep...maybe you can check out my story and give me a few suggestions...anyways it was really good, the whole story was awesome!
3/28/2004 c25 4anatidaephobiac
*cries* I can't believe its over! That was one of my favs... I would get so excited to come home from school and see you've updated... You better write more stories, and soon. And by the way I can see why you're so proud of the chapter though (I would be too if it was mine)... The chapter is great... but the whole story overall is awesome too... You have to write more... Lots more. And think about getting published someday... you're a really talented writer.
4anatidaephobiac*cries* I can't believe its over! That was one of my favs... I would get so excited to come home from school and see you've updated... You better write more stories, and soon. And by the way I can see why you're so proud of the chapter though (I would be too if it was mine)... The chapter is great... but the whole story overall is awesome too... You have to write more... Lots more. And think about getting published someday... you're a really talented writer.
3/28/2004 c24 19scary miss mary
Yay! Another Labyrinth obsessee! I worship that film. Have you seen House of Sand and Fog? It has Jennifer Connelly in it. She's fantastic! *gasp* There's a Best of Bowie DVD? I didn't know! I have the cd but not the dvd.. hmm... *trots off to amazon*
Great chapter. It's really different from the rest. This is the first time Kat's been completely irrational. Good work.
Yay, I loved reading the Diva Pixie again. :D It makes me so happy. A one off would be wonderful! However, only write if it feels right.
19scary miss maryYay! Another Labyrinth obsessee! I worship that film. Have you seen House of Sand and Fog? It has Jennifer Connelly in it. She's fantastic! *gasp* There's a Best of Bowie DVD? I didn't know! I have the cd but not the dvd.. hmm... *trots off to amazon*
Great chapter. It's really different from the rest. This is the first time Kat's been completely irrational. Good work.
Yay, I loved reading the Diva Pixie again. :D It makes me so happy. A one off would be wonderful! However, only write if it feels right.
3/28/2004 c25 AnotherDreamer
I liked your story and everything. Would you ever consider writing a sequel or anything. Just asking. Good job!
I liked your story and everything. Would you ever consider writing a sequel or anything. Just asking. Good job!
3/28/2004 c24 AlwaysFullOfHeart
Oh, I love your story! It's kind of like how my life is going on right now. I can actually relate to this story in a way. Cna't wait for next chap!
Oh, I love your story! It's kind of like how my life is going on right now. I can actually relate to this story in a way. Cna't wait for next chap!
3/27/2004 c24 21WiredCrazyFrances
ooh...i like this chapter...i feel so bad for Kat...keep up the great writing i love it!
21WiredCrazyFrancesooh...i like this chapter...i feel so bad for Kat...keep up the great writing i love it!
3/27/2004 c24 12FrenzyFan78
She's cracking! Ah! *sighs* Again... I liked it... write more...
sheesh i feel so un-original... i write the same thing with every review... oh well
~FrenzyFan78
12FrenzyFan78She's cracking! Ah! *sighs* Again... I liked it... write more...
sheesh i feel so un-original... i write the same thing with every review... oh well
~FrenzyFan78
3/27/2004 c24 2CynicInLove
ouch..wince. she looks like she's on the verge of a mental breakdown. i mean...stepping in front of a car going 60mph isnt exactly what i would call sane. ahh...5 more? damn...im going to miss jake and kat. please update sooN!
2CynicInLoveouch..wince. she looks like she's on the verge of a mental breakdown. i mean...stepping in front of a car going 60mph isnt exactly what i would call sane. ahh...5 more? damn...im going to miss jake and kat. please update sooN!