for Discontented1/3/2004 c2 
1IntricatePain
Oh man! (rubs hands together) This is gonna be so good, I can feel it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
1IntricatePainOh man! (rubs hands together) This is gonna be so good, I can feel it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/3/2004 c1 5Mandier
Wow!
This looks really good so far!
You have a good use of vocabulary, too! It's nice to have a good variety of words.
I don't really have anything bad to say, I just hope you update soon! Keep going, definately!
If you can, could you please r&r my new story, When Snow Falls in Vermont? Thanks!
5MandierWow!
This looks really good so far!
You have a good use of vocabulary, too! It's nice to have a good variety of words.
I don't really have anything bad to say, I just hope you update soon! Keep going, definately!
If you can, could you please r&r my new story, When Snow Falls in Vermont? Thanks!