for Discontented5/20/2008 c25 sunflower.kiss
Wow. It was kind of a sudden ending - gotta love those! I loved it. (: Awesome!
Wow. It was kind of a sudden ending - gotta love those! I loved it. (: Awesome!
4/27/2008 c25 
1nvme5
Its' official!
I LOVE JAKE..
Now, I want more... PLEase.. a sequel? With an insight to Jake's life and further deveopments in Jake/Kat relationshiop, pwease?
1nvme5Its' official!
I LOVE JAKE..
Now, I want more... PLEase.. a sequel? With an insight to Jake's life and further deveopments in Jake/Kat relationshiop, pwease?
4/13/2008 c5 meowmeowmiro
okay so im not very far in the story but so far i think it is pretty brilliant and i absolutely love your characters!
can you please post pictures of what you imagined your characters to look like, if it is not too much of an effort.
okay so im not very far in the story but so far i think it is pretty brilliant and i absolutely love your characters!
can you please post pictures of what you imagined your characters to look like, if it is not too much of an effort.
4/3/2008 c25 3Colie Rae
First I must say I loved the story and I loved the format in which you wrote it, it gave so much insight and yet it was never boring. I must admit though, as I read it all in one sitting, it was a bit depressing. I mean, it was a serious self pity party and bad things just kept piling on but you showed the POV so well. At one point I was furious with her mother and then I stopped and thought about it and realized that that shows true skill for you. I must say, I wish you would have given us a bit more before ending this. I did love the last little conversation bit but I mean, she had a breakdown and then she was fine and end of story! It just seemed a bit abrupt. I realize that you did not want it to end with her life suddenly perfect and I can appreciate that but I would have liked a bit more stabily or some more about Jake as you have me intrigued. Good work overall though. I love your writing style in this piece.
3Colie RaeFirst I must say I loved the story and I loved the format in which you wrote it, it gave so much insight and yet it was never boring. I must admit though, as I read it all in one sitting, it was a bit depressing. I mean, it was a serious self pity party and bad things just kept piling on but you showed the POV so well. At one point I was furious with her mother and then I stopped and thought about it and realized that that shows true skill for you. I must say, I wish you would have given us a bit more before ending this. I did love the last little conversation bit but I mean, she had a breakdown and then she was fine and end of story! It just seemed a bit abrupt. I realize that you did not want it to end with her life suddenly perfect and I can appreciate that but I would have liked a bit more stabily or some more about Jake as you have me intrigued. Good work overall though. I love your writing style in this piece.
3/13/2008 c25 3dontneedyou
I love this story. I read it all in one shot. I stayed up until 3 am reading it!
3dontneedyouI love this story. I read it all in one shot. I stayed up until 3 am reading it!
3/7/2008 c25 MackayFire
Great story! I have to say I hate her mother but I love Jake so badly. I liked the way you could make Kat so whiney and self-pitying yet likable at the same time.
Great story! I have to say I hate her mother but I love Jake so badly. I liked the way you could make Kat so whiney and self-pitying yet likable at the same time.
2/9/2008 c5 kimberly
awesome chapter!
kat's family is just like mine.
harvard is in massachusetts. i think.
awesome chapter!
kat's family is just like mine.
harvard is in massachusetts. i think.
1/22/2008 c25 1lesleydevon
I have to admit, that your writing style threw me off a bit and I thought that everything was a bit unrealistic in the beginning.
But then I realized, that crap like this happens all the time. Even with me. I think Kat's breakdown at the end of this story is great. It's a big climax and you put so much feeling into the story that I was cussing Kat's mom out all the time I was reading this.
Congrats.
1lesleydevonI have to admit, that your writing style threw me off a bit and I thought that everything was a bit unrealistic in the beginning.
But then I realized, that crap like this happens all the time. Even with me. I think Kat's breakdown at the end of this story is great. It's a big climax and you put so much feeling into the story that I was cussing Kat's mom out all the time I was reading this.
Congrats.
1/4/2008 c10 11Spiralling Words
really cute chappie! OOH! DID JAKE KISS HER! PLEASE LET HIM KISS HER! heh! please update again soon!
11Spiralling Wordsreally cute chappie! OOH! DID JAKE KISS HER! PLEASE LET HIM KISS HER! heh! please update again soon!
12/16/2007 c25 EdwardDazzlesMe
Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe
Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe