for Discontented11/27/2006 c25 pangur
hmm a little constructive critisism... well, there were alot of loose ends i noticed. like, the reader doesn't find out anything about jake. we don't find out if he's going to college or if they stay together, if she ever ties things up with her mom, alot of things. anyway, just thought i'd give you my two cents :)
hmm a little constructive critisism... well, there were alot of loose ends i noticed. like, the reader doesn't find out anything about jake. we don't find out if he's going to college or if they stay together, if she ever ties things up with her mom, alot of things. anyway, just thought i'd give you my two cents :)
11/16/2006 c25 
1little-box
I just sat down and read your entire story after it being recommended by a friend and what can i say? its amazing
your development of both kat and jake were amazing
you just write beautifully.
i am going to start reading your others.
wow.
i am just so impressed.
you are an amazing writer.
1little-boxI just sat down and read your entire story after it being recommended by a friend and what can i say? its amazing
your development of both kat and jake were amazing
you just write beautifully.
i am going to start reading your others.
wow.
i am just so impressed.
you are an amazing writer.
10/23/2006 c5 4Kyuuketuki
poor poor kat. i feel her pain. my mother is exactly - and i mean *exactly* - like hers. i just hate when they treat you like cattle you know? It's like they think our only idea in our mionds is " MO!... moo?"
Psycho moms suck... serve so well for inspiration, though. sort of any oxymoron (?) or something like that.
sucks for her, being stuck in a car with her that long. poor poor kat.
4Kyuuketukipoor poor kat. i feel her pain. my mother is exactly - and i mean *exactly* - like hers. i just hate when they treat you like cattle you know? It's like they think our only idea in our mionds is " MO!... moo?"
Psycho moms suck... serve so well for inspiration, though. sort of any oxymoron (?) or something like that.
sucks for her, being stuck in a car with her that long. poor poor kat.
9/11/2006 c6 2hellohellolove
Oh, lol. hahaha. Nice. Lovely story. hahaha. can't stop laughing. anyway, i love it!
2hellohelloloveOh, lol. hahaha. Nice. Lovely story. hahaha. can't stop laughing. anyway, i love it!
8/28/2006 c9 tempestreigns
… Ew. When did she start sleeping with him?
That must be why she’s been so giggly lately.
XD
… Ew. When did she start sleeping with him?
That must be why she’s been so giggly lately.
XD
7/30/2006 c25 72Forget-The-Sorrow
LOVED YOUR STORY! Just there's one thing that will bother me for the rest of my life: Where/Is Jake going to college. Right, yes, I am insane... LOVED YOUR STORY!
72Forget-The-SorrowLOVED YOUR STORY! Just there's one thing that will bother me for the rest of my life: Where/Is Jake going to college. Right, yes, I am insane... LOVED YOUR STORY!
4/5/2006 c25 7BITT3RSW33T
OH MI GOSH! I love it so much! It just...RELATES to me so much! The whole feeling alone and all, and I love how there was a message, a MORAL, a POINT in the story instead of a just 'it happened, the end' It teaches someone something, and i REALY want you to write a sequel! HONEST! and i just absoloutely LOVE the ending because it's so non hollywood and it's so REAL! So like something that can happen, unlike a happily ever after that just makes you believe in true love and shatter it after! I just LOVE it! You have NO idea how much! thank you SO much! I cried! I don't know why, but it's just you know, the feeling that someone GETS you!; )
7BITT3RSW33TOH MI GOSH! I love it so much! It just...RELATES to me so much! The whole feeling alone and all, and I love how there was a message, a MORAL, a POINT in the story instead of a just 'it happened, the end' It teaches someone something, and i REALY want you to write a sequel! HONEST! and i just absoloutely LOVE the ending because it's so non hollywood and it's so REAL! So like something that can happen, unlike a happily ever after that just makes you believe in true love and shatter it after! I just LOVE it! You have NO idea how much! thank you SO much! I cried! I don't know why, but it's just you know, the feeling that someone GETS you!; )