
12/18/2005 c1
18tree plebian
wow. Your poems are all really amazing. I like this one the best though. It's really really pretty.

wow. Your poems are all really amazing. I like this one the best though. It's really really pretty.
5/11/2005 c1
62lifescrewsusall
"all the colors of the rainbow and gleaming like plastic" love the imagery...i can really sense your passionate feelings in this

"all the colors of the rainbow and gleaming like plastic" love the imagery...i can really sense your passionate feelings in this
6/21/2004 c1
16feverdog
i don't really know what to say about this poem, but i like it. it's beautiful in one of those rare-only-come-upon-once-every-so-often so you gotta grab it while you can. (i love rock music - =) ) it's on my favorite list. it's beauitufl, rare, perfection that comes in inperfection. if i knew this guy (in the poem) i'd grab on to him while i could, and lace my name into his rock music (rockin' his world inside out)

i don't really know what to say about this poem, but i like it. it's beautiful in one of those rare-only-come-upon-once-every-so-often so you gotta grab it while you can. (i love rock music - =) ) it's on my favorite list. it's beauitufl, rare, perfection that comes in inperfection. if i knew this guy (in the poem) i'd grab on to him while i could, and lace my name into his rock music (rockin' his world inside out)