for Words1/6/2004 c1 
36Blondieprincess
I like the idea its cool how you put in happy and sad i also like the line 'You've tickled my brain, i've felt your pain' it puts conflicting things together tickling,usualy happy, and pain, sad, its a really cool way of putting things. I think that there are spots that lines should be combind to make things flow better. good job
Blondie
36BlondieprincessI like the idea its cool how you put in happy and sad i also like the line 'You've tickled my brain, i've felt your pain' it puts conflicting things together tickling,usualy happy, and pain, sad, its a really cool way of putting things. I think that there are spots that lines should be combind to make things flow better. good job
Blondie