for Some Inspirational Stories5/28/2005 c2 
23wishingdreamingwaiting
Your work is so amusing! And it makes me feel like such a jackass, I love it! (Honestly though, you are awesome at writing with satire and sarcasm.) Great work!
23wishingdreamingwaitingYour work is so amusing! And it makes me feel like such a jackass, I love it! (Honestly though, you are awesome at writing with satire and sarcasm.) Great work!
5/20/2004 c3 2William Winters
Stunned silence here...
The first two stories were extremely clever, especially the second one. You may not fight a traditional flame-war, but you do like to thrash out at the less mature writers on Fictionpress (I hope I don't count as one of THOSE...). I just can't get enough of your humor.
The third story...it's almost cruel. The moral does go against my beleifs a bit, but...I suppose it makes me a sick person, but I had to laugh at all of it after the Canadian penny joke.
Keep writing!
2William WintersStunned silence here...
The first two stories were extremely clever, especially the second one. You may not fight a traditional flame-war, but you do like to thrash out at the less mature writers on Fictionpress (I hope I don't count as one of THOSE...). I just can't get enough of your humor.
The third story...it's almost cruel. The moral does go against my beleifs a bit, but...I suppose it makes me a sick person, but I had to laugh at all of it after the Canadian penny joke.
Keep writing!
4/3/2004 c2 3Biola Gal
I just wanted to say that I found your stories amusing, in addition to being well written. The tone of detached irony is quite effective, especially in the morals. I have to admit, though, that I didn't enjoy the third story as much as the first two. I think its because you tried to parody a generalization, rather than a specific story. Also, the first two have a familar sort of feel, quite in keeping with reality, which I don't see as much in the third. I'm sorry I can't be more specific about why it doesn't work as well. All in all, though, very nice.
3Biola GalI just wanted to say that I found your stories amusing, in addition to being well written. The tone of detached irony is quite effective, especially in the morals. I have to admit, though, that I didn't enjoy the third story as much as the first two. I think its because you tried to parody a generalization, rather than a specific story. Also, the first two have a familar sort of feel, quite in keeping with reality, which I don't see as much in the third. I'm sorry I can't be more specific about why it doesn't work as well. All in all, though, very nice.
1/5/2004 c2 Dylan Wiles
Are we really that bad? :) Well what the hey , we're writers not rocket scientists!'Nuther good-un.
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Are we really that bad? :) Well what the hey , we're writers not rocket scientists!'Nuther good-un.
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1/5/2004 c1 Dylan Wiles
A parable for the twenty-first century. Beautiful! Love it
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A parable for the twenty-first century. Beautiful! Love it
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1/5/2004 c3 DYLAN WILES
This thing just kills me.There are two more of these that just popped up today that Ill be going to next , but what I really wanted to say was how much I enjoyed your review of my story 'Kid'. Its the first honest review I've gotten and if your homepage address was working I would write you and thank you at length.
Thank you
Dylan
This thing just kills me.There are two more of these that just popped up today that Ill be going to next , but what I really wanted to say was how much I enjoyed your review of my story 'Kid'. Its the first honest review I've gotten and if your homepage address was working I would write you and thank you at length.
Thank you
Dylan