for Consumed by Shadow1/7/2004 c1 
121Seeker of the Way
I felt this poem. I feel it even now. fears and doubts and
"Your life, your dreams, what you could have bbecome
wasted away becasue of doubt and sadness"
Yeah., I need t otake hold of things again, breath again! read Infinite smiles "Life vs. Living"!
You may want to add a more "positive" breakthrough type poem as a second chapter - that would be cool! or a trilogy! Recognition, Struggle, Victory!
Take Care!
121Seeker of the WayI felt this poem. I feel it even now. fears and doubts and
"Your life, your dreams, what you could have bbecome
wasted away becasue of doubt and sadness"
Yeah., I need t otake hold of things again, breath again! read Infinite smiles "Life vs. Living"!
You may want to add a more "positive" breakthrough type poem as a second chapter - that would be cool! or a trilogy! Recognition, Struggle, Victory!
Take Care!
1/5/2004 c1 28LaughinEyes024
I liked this a lot, despite the darkness of it all. It shows a lot of feeling. It's similar to some of my darker poems. Keep writing mon. Peace.
28LaughinEyes024I liked this a lot, despite the darkness of it all. It shows a lot of feeling. It's similar to some of my darker poems. Keep writing mon. Peace.
1/5/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
A very interesting poem. I really like the metaphors that you used, it really captured the thoughts in a way that I've never read before. I congratulate you for being able to write your feelings down on paper that conflict with so many others. Keep up the good work!
14arbysauce93A very interesting poem. I really like the metaphors that you used, it really captured the thoughts in a way that I've never read before. I congratulate you for being able to write your feelings down on paper that conflict with so many others. Keep up the good work!