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1/20/2005 c1 18Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis
I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer.

I can't think of any bad things to say.

I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing.
12/31/2004 c1 35Genine
I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff.

12/12/2004 c1 45Sammy- B
thtas good, i like the ending
5/20/2004 c1 JohnBarley
Right on Sister!
1/12/2004 c1 3Kelsey Windsor
ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one =)
1/6/2004 c1 4Medron Pryde
LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it!

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