
4/16/2004 c1
57Literary-lycos
WOW... intense I absolutley liked this one. I'm trying to find a word that describes it but i just can't, you have a talentin writing. at first glance people would think it simple but theres a greater psychology to your poems which is really cool.

WOW... intense I absolutley liked this one. I'm trying to find a word that describes it but i just can't, you have a talentin writing. at first glance people would think it simple but theres a greater psychology to your poems which is really cool.
3/8/2004 c1 Schubiegirl
This is sad. I've been reading some of your poems, and ironically enough everyonei look at is about heartbreak. you have a good insight into bad relationships, and i hope it's not from personal experience. This kind of reminds me of The Beautiful Face, a poem of mine, though i don't know why. Good job though, and thanks for reviewing my work.
This is sad. I've been reading some of your poems, and ironically enough everyonei look at is about heartbreak. you have a good insight into bad relationships, and i hope it's not from personal experience. This kind of reminds me of The Beautiful Face, a poem of mine, though i don't know why. Good job though, and thanks for reviewing my work.
3/2/2004 c1
9Radical Chic
That is so sad. Very beautiful though. The story told here is very somber, but your wording is perfect.

That is so sad. Very beautiful though. The story told here is very somber, but your wording is perfect.
2/4/2004 c1
12Mirrorwind
OOh, another good one. This is so intense and you express yourself so well...this is really good! I like the ending, it feels so hopeless (I don't like being hopeless, I like the way you expressed it...you get it, I think...)

OOh, another good one. This is so intense and you express yourself so well...this is really good! I like the ending, it feels so hopeless (I don't like being hopeless, I like the way you expressed it...you get it, I think...)
1/29/2004 c1
17Wingless Fairy
You say you want critisism, but this does not need it. Another great poem. Congrats

You say you want critisism, but this does not need it. Another great poem. Congrats
1/7/2004 c1
21Crystal Snowflakes
I can't say much for this...beautifully written... also inspiring. Great job!

I can't say much for this...beautifully written... also inspiring. Great job!
1/7/2004 c1
55WannaBePoet
I really like this, I'm not sure there's anything to really criticize about it, it had a good flow, nice job.

I really like this, I'm not sure there's anything to really criticize about it, it had a good flow, nice job.
1/6/2004 c1
25LaurasPoetryCorner
I have no critism for this piece, but I haven't much to comment either. It's one of those pieces you understand inwardly but can't comment outwarld per se about, for it's more feeling what is written than anything else.

I have no critism for this piece, but I haven't much to comment either. It's one of those pieces you understand inwardly but can't comment outwarld per se about, for it's more feeling what is written than anything else.
1/6/2004 c1
144Infinite Smiles
I LOVE IT.. SO SAD..I LIKE THE WHOLE IDEA BEHIND IT - I LIKE HOW YOU DESCRIBE IT. VERY WELL WRITTEN.

I LOVE IT.. SO SAD..I LIKE THE WHOLE IDEA BEHIND IT - I LIKE HOW YOU DESCRIBE IT. VERY WELL WRITTEN.