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4/16/2004 c1 57Literary-lycos
WOW... intense I absolutley liked this one. I'm trying to find a word that describes it but i just can't, you have a talentin writing. at first glance people would think it simple but theres a greater psychology to your poems which is really cool.
3/8/2004 c1 Schubiegirl
This is sad. I've been reading some of your poems, and ironically enough everyonei look at is about heartbreak. you have a good insight into bad relationships, and i hope it's not from personal experience. This kind of reminds me of The Beautiful Face, a poem of mine, though i don't know why. Good job though, and thanks for reviewing my work.
3/2/2004 c1 9Radical Chic
That is so sad. Very beautiful though. The story told here is very somber, but your wording is perfect.
2/4/2004 c1 12Mirrorwind
OOh, another good one. This is so intense and you express yourself so well...this is really good! I like the ending, it feels so hopeless (I don't like being hopeless, I like the way you expressed it...you get it, I think...)
1/29/2004 c1 17Wingless Fairy
You say you want critisism, but this does not need it. Another great poem. Congrats
1/7/2004 c1 21Crystal Snowflakes
I can't say much for this...beautifully written... also inspiring. Great job!
1/7/2004 c1 55WannaBePoet
I really like this, I'm not sure there's anything to really criticize about it, it had a good flow, nice job.
1/6/2004 c1 25LaurasPoetryCorner
I have no critism for this piece, but I haven't much to comment either. It's one of those pieces you understand inwardly but can't comment outwarld per se about, for it's more feeling what is written than anything else.
1/6/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I LOVE IT.. SO SAD..I LIKE THE WHOLE IDEA BEHIND IT - I LIKE HOW YOU DESCRIBE IT. VERY WELL WRITTEN.

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