for waters of pain
5/24/2004 c1 Anonymous
so why don't you commit suicide, do us all a favour...
1/21/2004 c1 210Ayx
An interesting poem you got there. Keep up the writing.
1/14/2004 c1 27Spirit Child
This is really well done, you managed to get tons of feeling into a really short poem. At first i thought it was about tears, but it ended up sounding more like blood