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3/14/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
the last stanza was surprising and wonderful...well done
1/9/2004 c1 121Seeker of the Way
I LOVED the final lines:
yet nothing moves
until
he says it does...
This so true, when the girl (or in your case, guy) you long for doesn't return your feeings or do it in a way you envisioned then those final lines are true. Even if someone else comes forward that may evne better for you, despite all the advice, if you are into one person all else falls away.
Just a great way of expressing unrequited love! I have personally felt his way.
Also I apologize, but I could only wait till the end of the day and went ahead and posted the poem inspired by the one before this one. I hope people like it, it is meant to be, in the end, a "yay for mankind" poem!

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