for Found Again11/2/2005 c6 
4Rio's Desire
Very interesting, but your last chapter was a climatic one, but please update more often, i had almost forgotten this story.
4Rio's DesireVery interesting, but your last chapter was a climatic one, but please update more often, i had almost forgotten this story.
2/1/2005 c5 kiki
i really like this story- no lie! it's creative, different, and i'm falling in love with demonds. now, make sure to update often!
i really like this story- no lie! it's creative, different, and i'm falling in love with demonds. now, make sure to update often!
2/1/2005 c5 Rio's Desire
Hey you finally updated! I like the story so far. I guess even demons can have feelings for humans. Can't wait to read more.
Hey you finally updated! I like the story so far. I guess even demons can have feelings for humans. Can't wait to read more.
7/2/2004 c4 Rio's Desire
Oh please post your next chapter soon! You have a few spelling errors, but your story so far is great! And I didn't think you rushed into your story too soon with the snare teams.
Oh please post your next chapter soon! You have a few spelling errors, but your story so far is great! And I didn't think you rushed into your story too soon with the snare teams.
6/4/2004 c4 4Unity-Girl
I liked this chapter 'cause it seemed more humorous in some ways. See you worked in the math thing-y you working on while we talked. I almost felt sorry for Carden... he had to be a jerk... Love it and you! (not that way, baka!)
~Kai~
4Unity-GirlI liked this chapter 'cause it seemed more humorous in some ways. See you worked in the math thing-y you working on while we talked. I almost felt sorry for Carden... he had to be a jerk... Love it and you! (not that way, baka!)
~Kai~
5/27/2004 c4 okami no hanyou
you see, since your stroies good, you're allowed to update slowly. But this dosn't mean cliffies are allowed
you see, since your stroies good, you're allowed to update slowly. But this dosn't mean cliffies are allowed
5/26/2004 c4 57NeWriter
I just started to read this story and the subject seemed a little familiar but then when I read your words and began noticing your style I knew that it was really well written. I can only give you (hopefully) one good advice: try to describe the forest, the settings around Andra and Carden more. You have a good vocabulary and I like the way that you wrote the two characters' personalities.
I hope you do update soon and really look into my advice! Very good! ;)
57NeWriterI just started to read this story and the subject seemed a little familiar but then when I read your words and began noticing your style I knew that it was really well written. I can only give you (hopefully) one good advice: try to describe the forest, the settings around Andra and Carden more. You have a good vocabulary and I like the way that you wrote the two characters' personalities.
I hope you do update soon and really look into my advice! Very good! ;)
5/26/2004 c4 kay
my review button isnt purple, but heres a review for you! I love CARDEN!
my review button isnt purple, but heres a review for you! I love CARDEN!
5/26/2004 c1 2GirlMaverick
I forgot to say sorry to ClumsyGrace for getting rid of Jogant. he was never meant to be a main character. He will be back later in the story though, but it may be a while. Sorry, I would keep him but it would completely ruin the story line.
2GirlMaverickI forgot to say sorry to ClumsyGrace for getting rid of Jogant. he was never meant to be a main character. He will be back later in the story though, but it may be a while. Sorry, I would keep him but it would completely ruin the story line.
2/7/2004 c3 4Unity-Girl
A lot more humor in this chappie, Missy.
I like. ^_^
Nothing much to say except:
Damn midterms
and
Keep it coming
4Unity-GirlA lot more humor in this chappie, Missy.
I like. ^_^
Nothing much to say except:
Damn midterms
and
Keep it coming
1/16/2004 c2 4Unity-Girl
Well, I'd have to say, Missy, that you've started out great *smiles* but discribe your charicters more, 'kay? And do that past/not really past, thing I was talking about if you can figure out what I mean. Your great, otherwise. And... Andra reminds me of you...
4Unity-GirlWell, I'd have to say, Missy, that you've started out great *smiles* but discribe your charicters more, 'kay? And do that past/not really past, thing I was talking about if you can figure out what I mean. Your great, otherwise. And... Andra reminds me of you...