
2/23/2004 c1 The Golden Dragons Blood
Well, there were a fiew run-on sentences but otherwise-wow-just wow. very good. It's worded very nicely and you have a very interesting and original plot. Keep writing!
Acenasapheru
Well, there were a fiew run-on sentences but otherwise-wow-just wow. very good. It's worded very nicely and you have a very interesting and original plot. Keep writing!
Acenasapheru