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1/13/2004 c1 ssj-princess23
O! man mary...wow
1/11/2004 c1 53Punky Monkey
the 'like' at the start of each line held the flow together and the final line 'like death' ended the poem ona strong note.
Keep writing :)
1/10/2004 c1 168SeaVoi
Wow, what a strond message Im speechless! (SPELLING)
1/10/2004 c1 151wastedlovexxx
This is really good mary..I really love it..Check out some of my poems they might inspire you :D
1/8/2004 c1 141Not So Soft
wow, awesome. Great way of describing pain
1/8/2004 c1 18My Ruin
Damn, how true. very good!

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