
1/27/2004 c1
26esotericblood
Heheh, this story was actually pretty suspenseful. I liked it. I was really well written. Even though the kids were pulling a bad prank, you captured the innocence of it.

Heheh, this story was actually pretty suspenseful. I liked it. I was really well written. Even though the kids were pulling a bad prank, you captured the innocence of it.