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1/24/2004 c1 The Darkness Of Death
You never seem to struggle in making your poems ryhme. I like this poem a lot and especially the way that it finishes on such a lighter and happier note. Good stuff!
1/11/2004 c1 53Punky Monkey
Good poem i like the way the poem ended on a happier note.
Keep writing :)
1/10/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
I sense some happiness in the very end. You care about someone very much. I hope they feel the same.
1/10/2004 c1 2Sheila Ibre
In a word, I would describe it as 'moving'. Right now I feel like flinging all my troubles away to wait. Your poems are wonderful, aode, spontaneous or not.
1/9/2004 c1 22Tempest Drifter
Waiting. For my life I consider it a curse. I pray you don't wait in vain yourself. When you write of these things, there are parts I'll never know. You write from your heart and feeling. Don't stop. It may seem abstract to others, but that's where true beauty lies. As for being spontaneous...I've been writing a lot of spontaneous stuff myself. I guess we discover things that way. We feel more than think.
1/9/2004 c1 S.J Will
Very good poem

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