for The Questions On My Mind1/10/2004 c1 
16EarthHealer
Incredible grasp of the mind in here. One suggestion: to make it flow a little better, maybe cut out the "even" in "Would someone even mourn?".
Very nice job.
16EarthHealerIncredible grasp of the mind in here. One suggestion: to make it flow a little better, maybe cut out the "even" in "Would someone even mourn?".
Very nice job.