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why isn't there more? :‹
why isn't there more? :‹
6/8/2005 c11 Mairi32hotmail.com
Awesome ending to this chapter! I love it. excellent job christi. high 5! lol
Awesome ending to this chapter! I love it. excellent job christi. high 5! lol
6/8/2005 c11 Logophile
So... does Archer like Sarah? You totally need to update more, I love this story with the passion of a thousand white hot burning suns.
So... does Archer like Sarah? You totally need to update more, I love this story with the passion of a thousand white hot burning suns.
4/9/2005 c10 Mairi
Nice cliffhanger, Christi! It's super good. Keep it up!
Nice cliffhanger, Christi! It's super good. Keep it up!
3/27/2005 c10 Extrenm54
Ok, good chapter. I see the potential for that action build up you were talking about. I am looking foreward to the next one. Alos, I hope we learn more about archer one of these days. He is pretty mysterious. And why would Sarah not see the indigo aura till now? All the questions I have will probably be answered eventually so I wait for more. Good stuff. Keep it up.
Ok, good chapter. I see the potential for that action build up you were talking about. I am looking foreward to the next one. Alos, I hope we learn more about archer one of these days. He is pretty mysterious. And why would Sarah not see the indigo aura till now? All the questions I have will probably be answered eventually so I wait for more. Good stuff. Keep it up.
3/16/2005 c9 Colton Keith
Oh! Christi, I've read every single chapter now and I LOVE IT! I can't wait until you update next! I'm beginning to see a lot of parrelels between your life and the story, and not just the strange obsession with Johnny Depp. ;) I love your story so much! I can't wait until you reveal a bit more of the "butterfly" plot, and please, try and make it dark. Darkness will be good. Mwa ha ha! *cackles as lightning strikes* *hair is left crazily frizzy*
UPDATE! NOW! ;)
-Colton
Oh! Christi, I've read every single chapter now and I LOVE IT! I can't wait until you update next! I'm beginning to see a lot of parrelels between your life and the story, and not just the strange obsession with Johnny Depp. ;) I love your story so much! I can't wait until you reveal a bit more of the "butterfly" plot, and please, try and make it dark. Darkness will be good. Mwa ha ha! *cackles as lightning strikes* *hair is left crazily frizzy*
UPDATE! NOW! ;)
-Colton
3/8/2005 c9 Extrenm54
Hm, what does that mean? I am guessing something bad. Good filler chapter, cant wait for more.
Hm, what does that mean? I am guessing something bad. Good filler chapter, cant wait for more.
2/28/2005 c1 1Stargaezr
Well, you wanted praise to help you keep writing? Here's my contribution. I may not get to read much yet (It's too late. ...must...sleep...), but that first chapter was great! The whole butterfly thing with Jacob and Amy, that was delightfully freaky! :D And hey, Saskatchewan isn't ALL flat ( I take it that's where this is set? Cause you mentioned "Boring")
Well, you wanted praise to help you keep writing? Here's my contribution. I may not get to read much yet (It's too late. ...must...sleep...), but that first chapter was great! The whole butterfly thing with Jacob and Amy, that was delightfully freaky! :D And hey, Saskatchewan isn't ALL flat ( I take it that's where this is set? Cause you mentioned "Boring")
2/1/2005 c9 1pixiewings25
oh interesting... butterflies getting hte kids?... i love Archer! and Sarah! plz update soon its very addicting!
oh interesting... butterflies getting hte kids?... i love Archer! and Sarah! plz update soon its very addicting!
7/15/2004 c8 Roz
Hey! Glad to see you FINALLY updated! :P I loved the Rain chapter; that was beautifully written. And hmm...do I detect a slight crush with Archer? lol. The story's really getting good! Keep writing...please!
Hey! Glad to see you FINALLY updated! :P I loved the Rain chapter; that was beautifully written. And hmm...do I detect a slight crush with Archer? lol. The story's really getting good! Keep writing...please!