for Origional1/13/2004 c1 ssj-princess23
lmfao! i love it
lmfao! i love it
1/11/2004 c1 
21Perfectly-Insane33
Uh...I don't want to get anyone mad at me, but you spelled 'original' wrong. Just telling you that.
21Perfectly-Insane33Uh...I don't want to get anyone mad at me, but you spelled 'original' wrong. Just telling you that.
1/11/2004 c1 53Punky Monkey
Hey its me the person you love so much. I'm guessing this poems about me.
Can i just say though i did give costructive critism to 'sacredthoughts' i told her where she needed to correct spelling and that certain lines didnt have enough syllables in? If thats not constructive critism then im not sure i know what is?
Anyway good poem, i'd like to say though my poems arent out of a book, they're all mine!
And if you say they're all good enough to be in a book then thats pleased me!
Do what you do and do it always...
53Punky MonkeyHey its me the person you love so much. I'm guessing this poems about me.
Can i just say though i did give costructive critism to 'sacredthoughts' i told her where she needed to correct spelling and that certain lines didnt have enough syllables in? If thats not constructive critism then im not sure i know what is?
Anyway good poem, i'd like to say though my poems arent out of a book, they're all mine!
And if you say they're all good enough to be in a book then thats pleased me!
Do what you do and do it always...