for With Flightless Wings1/31/2004 c2 
14GlueStik
OK, well I must admit I am a little confuzed, this is so different then what I expected. You changed everything on me. Everything! Good so far though, I am confuzed but I always am when I read the first few chapters of anything you write. But, I am once again, addicted to your writn. What's new right? Well, Teese, Yeah!. I promised and I kept my promise. he he No but really it is good.
love always
jamie
gluestik
14GlueStikOK, well I must admit I am a little confuzed, this is so different then what I expected. You changed everything on me. Everything! Good so far though, I am confuzed but I always am when I read the first few chapters of anything you write. But, I am once again, addicted to your writn. What's new right? Well, Teese, Yeah!. I promised and I kept my promise. he he No but really it is good.
love always
jamie
gluestik
1/27/2004 c2 kyoko
sorry I didn't review earlier!...I've been lazy..and yeah...^^; well anyway great job on this chapter its already getting exciting! I wonder what Colin's brother's name is..hmm...well do continue and please update soon!
sorry I didn't review earlier!...I've been lazy..and yeah...^^; well anyway great job on this chapter its already getting exciting! I wonder what Colin's brother's name is..hmm...well do continue and please update soon!
1/18/2004 c2 39Kesshi Mashin
Another nice chappy, neko-baka. Get another one out soon!
Mwahahahahahahaha, I'm useless for C&C... ^^;
39Kesshi MashinAnother nice chappy, neko-baka. Get another one out soon!
Mwahahahahahahaha, I'm useless for C&C... ^^;
1/11/2004 c1 kyoko
Great start to a hopefully very interesting story. You did a wonderful job of intertwining the past with the present and left us with something to look forward to in the future. Very well written, and you have a nack for description and a way with words. Please update soon and good luck.
Great start to a hopefully very interesting story. You did a wonderful job of intertwining the past with the present and left us with something to look forward to in the future. Very well written, and you have a nack for description and a way with words. Please update soon and good luck.
1/11/2004 c1 Kesshi Mashin
Wonderful. I enjoyed reading it immensely, and I do hope that you post the next one soon. A great read. ^_~
P.S. ~ Aww, I wanted to be the first reviewer. -_- Stupid computer crapped out on me, though...
Wonderful. I enjoyed reading it immensely, and I do hope that you post the next one soon. A great read. ^_~
P.S. ~ Aww, I wanted to be the first reviewer. -_- Stupid computer crapped out on me, though...
1/10/2004 c1 14GlueStik
Girl, I love you to death, but you hurt my feelings. Thinking that I'm gonna steal your story. I mean that copywrigth at the bottom of the page. No, but really though, I like it. It's so different than the original already. I'm looking forward to it. It should be interesting... I know constructive feedback. Well, I did notice two or three grammar/spelling erros... and ...I hate trying to do the negative feedback on you, you are so talented girl. Umm... Ok, I love you. I like your story. And umm... email me when you get another chappy up please please please
Jamie
14GlueStikGirl, I love you to death, but you hurt my feelings. Thinking that I'm gonna steal your story. I mean that copywrigth at the bottom of the page. No, but really though, I like it. It's so different than the original already. I'm looking forward to it. It should be interesting... I know constructive feedback. Well, I did notice two or three grammar/spelling erros... and ...I hate trying to do the negative feedback on you, you are so talented girl. Umm... Ok, I love you. I like your story. And umm... email me when you get another chappy up please please please
Jamie