for Dark poetry collection11/28/2003 c1 
8Evanescent dreams
Beautifully written. I love your diction. I hope you don't mind if i add you to my favorite stories list?
8Evanescent dreamsBeautifully written. I love your diction. I hope you don't mind if i add you to my favorite stories list?
12/27/2002 c1 3Jane Blue
gosh, these are nice!
i like these poems (particularly "final goodbyes"). they're just awfully mysterious!
3Jane Bluegosh, these are nice!
i like these poems (particularly "final goodbyes"). they're just awfully mysterious!
3/23/2002 c1 1hikari1
wow, these poems were really good... really REALLY good... hehe, i wish my poems were good... i mean they're a bit on the dark side too... sorta... *sigh* my poetry is not half as good as yours... well i have no time, but i might read your other poems later...
1hikari1wow, these poems were really good... really REALLY good... hehe, i wish my poems were good... i mean they're a bit on the dark side too... sorta... *sigh* my poetry is not half as good as yours... well i have no time, but i might read your other poems later...
7/8/2001 c1 Tony Quimby
I'm impressed. Good Stuff. Maybe I should read it now?
I'm impressed. Good Stuff. Maybe I should read it now?
2/18/2001 c1 sos
i shout is great. Hey at least your honest your poems are great, wish i had your confidence about my writeing. Yeah i was brill deep and (the main ellement of a good peom in my opinion) DEPRESSING! yes nice one! sos
i shout is great. Hey at least your honest your poems are great, wish i had your confidence about my writeing. Yeah i was brill deep and (the main ellement of a good peom in my opinion) DEPRESSING! yes nice one! sos
2/6/2001 c1 Aeslinn
Hi. =) I read your review for Raindrops and I wanted to see what you were all about. Wow, you got some GREAT stuff here, babe. =) Definitely dark and mysterious and oh, your poor sister! You made her CRY?
Hope you keep writing, you have great visuals and great talent. =)
Hi. =) I read your review for Raindrops and I wanted to see what you were all about. Wow, you got some GREAT stuff here, babe. =) Definitely dark and mysterious and oh, your poor sister! You made her CRY?
Hope you keep writing, you have great visuals and great talent. =)
1/26/2001 c1 13Dead Flower
|I shout| was great. I know how it feels, when you have a poem in your head, but it sucks when you write it/type it.
13Dead Flower|I shout| was great. I know how it feels, when you have a poem in your head, but it sucks when you write it/type it.
1/4/2001 c1 1BobbtheElf
Oh I liked these too. If capitalization bugs yo uas much as it bugs me you might want to fix that but it's just my pet peeve, I'm not trying to be a jerk. Seeya around.
1BobbtheElfOh I liked these too. If capitalization bugs yo uas much as it bugs me you might want to fix that but it's just my pet peeve, I'm not trying to be a jerk. Seeya around.
1/3/2001 c1 Darkling
ooh! I have found a kindred poet! ~wilts~ all right, maybe not *that.* BUt I wish I'd come up with some of these things. . .
ooh! I have found a kindred poet! ~wilts~ all right, maybe not *that.* BUt I wish I'd come up with some of these things. . .
1/2/2001 c1 Lovin'Brolli
I really liked those. I especially liked poisoned waters. all pretty intense, good stuff
I really liked those. I especially liked poisoned waters. all pretty intense, good stuff
1/2/2001 c1 laika
i love this. simply love this.
i love this. simply love this.
12/27/2000 c1 girl poisons boy
They're all really good but the first one and Final Goodbye are my favorites. :)
They're all really good but the first one and Final Goodbye are my favorites. :)
12/26/2000 c1 7playerhater
hmm...pretti good..dark, morbid, twisted.. *grins* im beginnin to lyke u... HAH..
7playerhaterhmm...pretti good..dark, morbid, twisted.. *grins* im beginnin to lyke u... HAH..
12/23/2000 c1 11Beautiful 'N Bruised
I've written lots, but these are the only poems I Have on this site, but I'm going to put some more up - Oh yes and thanx! :)
11Beautiful 'N BruisedI've written lots, but these are the only poems I Have on this site, but I'm going to put some more up - Oh yes and thanx! :)