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34Nasifah
Hehe, I really like this! Stinking sirens. You did a good job, and this is really interesting all the way through. Also quite humerous. Keep writing!
34NasifahHehe, I really like this! Stinking sirens. You did a good job, and this is really interesting all the way through. Also quite humerous. Keep writing!
2/2/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
Love it! The rhyming seemed off in the second stanza, though. . .it's like an old ballad. Love it.
-Jessica
123breakdown in the waiting roomLove it! The rhyming seemed off in the second stanza, though. . .it's like an old ballad. Love it.
-Jessica
2/1/2004 c1 12haikumoon
I really like the rhythm in this poem and I think I should like to meet a siren and be her lover too. ^_^ If her voice didn't drive me to my death first.
~OB~
12haikumoonI really like the rhythm in this poem and I think I should like to meet a siren and be her lover too. ^_^ If her voice didn't drive me to my death first.
~OB~
1/31/2004 c1 12Mirrorwind
You're right, I do like this one! And it has a summary and a title, too! I know it may not be fair, but when an author can't think of a title or summary, even a bad one, for their work, I tend to wonder about their creativity. Not in your case, though! This is really different - I've never read anything like it (except one poem of my own, and yours is much better). I love the twist ending! One thing: in the third verse, I think you mean "grovel", instead of "gravel". But that's a typo. So other than that, an excellent, excellent job!
12MirrorwindYou're right, I do like this one! And it has a summary and a title, too! I know it may not be fair, but when an author can't think of a title or summary, even a bad one, for their work, I tend to wonder about their creativity. Not in your case, though! This is really different - I've never read anything like it (except one poem of my own, and yours is much better). I love the twist ending! One thing: in the third verse, I think you mean "grovel", instead of "gravel". But that's a typo. So other than that, an excellent, excellent job!
1/30/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
Aw! THis is so great. There really need to be more humorous poems out there. THe flow in this is so easy, very good job. Of course, the last stanza just finishes everything off beautifully. You can't help but smiling when reading this. Keep up the good work!
14arbysauce93Aw! THis is so great. There really need to be more humorous poems out there. THe flow in this is so easy, very good job. Of course, the last stanza just finishes everything off beautifully. You can't help but smiling when reading this. Keep up the good work!
1/30/2004 c1 white-wings01
Thats good and its very discriotive, i enjoyed it, good job.
thankyou for reviewing my story, I'll try to fix it.
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Thats good and its very discriotive, i enjoyed it, good job.
thankyou for reviewing my story, I'll try to fix it.
** You were the first peron to review me. Thankyou! **