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3/24/2005 c1 59Unfairy
Multi-stanza haiku? I never thought of that... Interesting write, I like it.
10/19/2004 c1 2philoslove
The imagery creates a beautiful picture. Your haiku is one beautiful piece! Especially the last line, it brings to mind that dawn signifies a new day, and hope. Love the imagery, it's beautiful! Magnificent work!
10/9/2004 c1 Becky
Again, a beautiful renga combining beautiful haiku's. Amazing work. You've certainly found your forte - one of your many, I'm sure! :)
9/16/2004 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Delicate & soft & mystic. -m-
8/3/2004 c1 76CoolBeans18s
I love the descriptions in this piece! With all your wonderfully imagery, you've really captured the picture... I can see it in my mind! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!
~ Coolbeans18s
5/31/2004 c1 24katmonkey
Brilliant imagery. Great haiku!
4/18/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
Beautiful descriptions... love the metaphors... the last line finishes it perfectly...
4/17/2004 c1 Hail the Warrior
Awesome, I see it, amazing, it reminds me of the time I watched the sunrise over Jerusalem. It was awe-inspiring.
Good write,
4/8/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
4/5/2004 c1 Ivriniel
A wonderful haiku. I think the adjectivs are very well chosen.
3/29/2004 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
How true...
3/25/2004 c1 10Seaspray
Wow. I really like this. Very creative use of language, you build a vivid and beautiful picture with your words. Well done!
3/21/2004 c1 35Mime
Amazing image portrayed here. Dawn is one of the most mezmerizing moments of day. Such a quiet, breath taking poem..
3/12/2004 c1 75Franken
Oh my heck, you have so many amazing words here.
Just loved em all, it made your Haiku combination just spectacular. Truly amazing!

3/3/2004 c1 HideAwayFairy
A beautiful poem. I love the second stanza the best. You're going on my fav authors list.
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