for Love4/30/2005 c2 Broken Melody
A clasic break up poem... This was funny, I like how you described you would give up chocalates for him the world, the world for him, but as you find out in the end he is not all that he seems to be...!
A clasic break up poem... This was funny, I like how you described you would give up chocalates for him the world, the world for him, but as you find out in the end he is not all that he seems to be...!
4/30/2005 c1 Broken Melody
I get the impresstion that this means love never lasts, the pretty rose resbembles the perfect copple while the ugly resembles the end... interesting...
I get the impresstion that this means love never lasts, the pretty rose resbembles the perfect copple while the ugly resembles the end... interesting...
4/29/2005 c9 
612simpleplan13
awesome.. i love hte first two stanzas.. i cn totally relte.. awesome descriptions too
612simpleplan13awesome.. i love hte first two stanzas.. i cn totally relte.. awesome descriptions too
2/4/2005 c1 72Earthbound Angel 49
i like the image of a rose and the sudden twist in the end. it caugh me by surprise but in a good way.
72Earthbound Angel 49i like the image of a rose and the sudden twist in the end. it caugh me by surprise but in a good way.
12/18/2004 c8 Monkey
mine, mine, it's all mine! lalala... yes true views on love... bwahahahah! kill... *laughs insanely while rocking in corner staring at beautiful, beautiful poem*: - p
mine, mine, it's all mine! lalala... yes true views on love... bwahahahah! kill... *laughs insanely while rocking in corner staring at beautiful, beautiful poem*: - p
12/18/2004 c7 Monkey
hehehe... sick bastard... don't know who you're talking about, but I do like the last line... very nice.
hehehe... sick bastard... don't know who you're talking about, but I do like the last line... very nice.
12/13/2004 c8 90poetic abortion
That was so I can't find a good word to describe. Great job Lellida ! ^-^ Don't ever stp writing !
~ Noelle ~
90poetic abortionThat was so I can't find a good word to describe. Great job Lellida ! ^-^ Don't ever stp writing !
~ Noelle ~
11/18/2004 c3 90poetic abortion
I LOVE THESE ROMANCE POEMS ! ::Glomps Lellida:: x] I love this ! All these poems are pertty ! *o* MAKE ANOTHER SOOD ! XD
~ Noelle ~
90poetic abortionI LOVE THESE ROMANCE POEMS ! ::Glomps Lellida:: x] I love this ! All these poems are pertty ! *o* MAKE ANOTHER SOOD ! XD
~ Noelle ~
11/6/2004 c8 33Blondeggman
HAHAHAHAHAHA! dud she actually write this? i'll sell it on ebay. sounds like megan. lol.
33BlondeggmanHAHAHAHAHAHA! dud she actually write this? i'll sell it on ebay. sounds like megan. lol.