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1/12/2004 c1 27BluEyes1
amazingly beautifully written. i, just...can't even think of anything else to say. but that was just...beautiful :)
1/12/2004 c1 18desolus
I really don't want to say 'wow' because it's over-used on fp, but my mind has gone blank.
So instead: Yeow. O_o
'we can defy rhyme.' - This really just smacked me upside the head.
I definitely agree to BecomingMyself's review of this piece. ^-^
1/11/2004 c1 15BecomingMyself
BEAUTIFUL!
Taking moments of time, playing with words to be with the author on some kind of flight from fantasy into reality, to end (or start) the circle again with the question "what if", reference to an illusion, to define the eternity of love by going into reality putting it into words...
GREAT POEM AND VERY WELL WRITTEN!
Write on, please...

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