for The Sound of Your Heart Beat10/28/2005 c1 
15Getuie
This is absolutely amazing... I feel like it's almost written as God's words for me. I have recently written a Xanga entry in which I pose the question "with what eyes do God look at me?"
Incredibly Beautiful piece.
15GetuieThis is absolutely amazing... I feel like it's almost written as God's words for me. I have recently written a Xanga entry in which I pose the question "with what eyes do God look at me?"
Incredibly Beautiful piece.
6/1/2004 c1 131HoldinOn2Him
This is so beautiful. I love this piece, How it's written for every single one of God's children , His special message to all of us!. You are so talented. Keep writing for God , Bless ya!
131HoldinOn2HimThis is so beautiful. I love this piece, How it's written for every single one of God's children , His special message to all of us!. You are so talented. Keep writing for God , Bless ya!
4/16/2004 c1 Edraith
Lovely. This beautifully depicts the Father’s heart of love towards us. There’s some relaxing, healing quality in this poem to restore the discouraged and hurting.
Lovely. This beautifully depicts the Father’s heart of love towards us. There’s some relaxing, healing quality in this poem to restore the discouraged and hurting.
3/28/2004 c1 52P.H. Wise
This is a beautiful poem. I love the image of the river filled with golden leaves. It's an image filled with more riches than any man ever found panning for gold in the rivers of California. :)
52P.H. WiseThis is a beautiful poem. I love the image of the river filled with golden leaves. It's an image filled with more riches than any man ever found panning for gold in the rivers of California. :)
1/11/2004 c1 10Crelian2202
Try to not start lines with and, simply delete the word for the entire poem to sound better.
10Crelian2202Try to not start lines with and, simply delete the word for the entire poem to sound better.