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8/24/2004 c1 26SinEe
Nice poem and good flow of words! Excelent job! =0
2/5/2004 c1 3Tears of Atlantis
I loved this. It described exactly how i feel. Not wanting to let go even though everything is telling you that it will never work. "Look into these foggy eyes/And just tonight, we'll kiss the skies" That was my favorite couplet! You really captured the feeling. Nicely done!
1/16/2004 c1 236mezzie
i swear you looked in my brain before you wrote this one... it is perfectly, exactly applicable to something in my life. seriously, i can't get over it, how insanely much it fits. i love "let me crash and let me burn/ let me smile when you return"... damnit i love all of it... it's so so so good. i'll shut up now!
mezzie
1/14/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
-smiles- that's a lovely poem. A good rhyme scheme to go with it as well. Very impressed. Nice imagery of the winter.
*Jenna*
1/12/2004 c1 18foolishshady
nicely written, im sorry about this situation if this really happened, i like this poem though, good job, if you have time and you dont mind, read and review my poems, thanks, bye

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