for Feignedly, You Will Be Loved2/4/2005 c1 
82Linnet
*coughhacksplutter* That's SO beautiful! Your rhyme scheme is refreshingly unique, and I love the message in this poem. Adding to my favorites!
-Linnet
(oh, and thanks for your review of Secrets of the Sea. You're always so kind to my poems. =))
82Linnet*coughhacksplutter* That's SO beautiful! Your rhyme scheme is refreshingly unique, and I love the message in this poem. Adding to my favorites!
-Linnet
(oh, and thanks for your review of Secrets of the Sea. You're always so kind to my poems. =))
2/2/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
Damn, you are *good.* You have a better grasp of rhythm than most of the poets I've read, on this site and published.
Putting you on the faves :) Love to read more of your work.
-Jessica
123breakdown in the waiting roomDamn, you are *good.* You have a better grasp of rhythm than most of the poets I've read, on this site and published.
Putting you on the faves :) Love to read more of your work.
-Jessica
2/1/2004 c1 12haikumoon
Interesting point of view. Once again the rhythm is very nice in this one.
~OBF~
12haikumoonInteresting point of view. Once again the rhythm is very nice in this one.
~OBF~
1/31/2004 c1 12Mirrorwind
Interesting! I like the comparisons and the neat rythm. I also just like the idea, of someone you shouldn't love. Once again, a well-written and creative poem!
12MirrorwindInteresting! I like the comparisons and the neat rythm. I also just like the idea, of someone you shouldn't love. Once again, a well-written and creative poem!
1/29/2004 c1 5Blake Owen
Interesting in an intriguing way. The first verse nicely written and described; quite normal. The second delves into a much more symbolic, metaphorically spiritual area.
I Like it.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
5Blake OwenInteresting in an intriguing way. The first verse nicely written and described; quite normal. The second delves into a much more symbolic, metaphorically spiritual area.
I Like it.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
1/18/2004 c1 12Peace-of-Pi
This is a beautiful poem! The wording is so delicate, and it's so nicely strung-together. I think the rhythm fell a bit in the second half, only in the line structure as opposed to the first half, but it was still wonderful.
12Peace-of-PiThis is a beautiful poem! The wording is so delicate, and it's so nicely strung-together. I think the rhythm fell a bit in the second half, only in the line structure as opposed to the first half, but it was still wonderful.