for Prozac Milkshake3/2/2010 c1 
94Cynthia Brent
This is great stuff, but I hope you will take the "prozac milkshake" concept and push it further . . . dig into the specifics of religion and conformity. Great beginning!
94Cynthia BrentThis is great stuff, but I hope you will take the "prozac milkshake" concept and push it further . . . dig into the specifics of religion and conformity. Great beginning!
11/9/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
the first line was absolute brilliance, as was the rest. awesome haikus are hard to come by, i'm glad i've found you.
the first line was absolute brilliance, as was the rest. awesome haikus are hard to come by, i'm glad i've found you.
3/19/2004 c1 69darkstar-rising
thats one impressive haiku. not that i'm an expert or anything, but i know what i likes.
interesting source of inspiration too.
-guy.
69darkstar-risingthats one impressive haiku. not that i'm an expert or anything, but i know what i likes.
interesting source of inspiration too.
-guy.
2/1/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
*blinks* How'd I miss this one?
I like it. Great imagery, as always. Such an interesting way to put it.
-Jess
123breakdown in the waiting room*blinks* How'd I miss this one?
I like it. Great imagery, as always. Such an interesting way to put it.
-Jess
2/1/2004 c1 161chairmanmeow
Maybe that Jessica needs to read your bio first... *laughs* But, great haiku.
161chairmanmeowMaybe that Jessica needs to read your bio first... *laughs* But, great haiku.
1/21/2004 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
Flame? Damn it, you need better self esteem. You're bloody divine.
80Plato's Optic RunawayFlame? Damn it, you need better self esteem. You're bloody divine.
1/17/2004 c1 100Keep it 100
I am a Christian, but nonetheless this was very original and a creative way to present it.
100Keep it 100I am a Christian, but nonetheless this was very original and a creative way to present it.
1/15/2004 c1 klipofffs
1this is re2ally 3good i 4like the 5title..1 im lac2tose in3telorant.. 4but i still li5ke mil1k th2ou3gh.. i 4get ga3ssy 4: )
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1this is re2ally 3good i 4like the 5title..1 im lac2tose in3telorant.. 4but i still li5ke mil1k th2ou3gh.. i 4get ga3ssy 4: )
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1/15/2004 c1 Corey
You're an idiot.
Just...idiot.
You're an idiot.
Just...idiot.
1/14/2004 c1 Jessica
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I wanna have your children.
That ROCKED. I love it.
-Jess
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I wanna have your children.
That ROCKED. I love it.
-Jess
1/14/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Ah you have the most unique take on things *ever*. Such an awesome awesome play on words.
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetryAh you have the most unique take on things *ever*. Such an awesome awesome play on words.
~lyv