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3/2/2010 c1 94Cynthia Brent
This is great stuff, but I hope you will take the "prozac milkshake" concept and push it further . . . dig into the specifics of religion and conformity. Great beginning!
11/9/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
the first line was absolute brilliance, as was the rest. awesome haikus are hard to come by, i'm glad i've found you.
4/19/2004 c1 217MistrissD
so interesting and creative ^.^
3/19/2004 c1 69darkstar-rising
thats one impressive haiku. not that i'm an expert or anything, but i know what i likes.
interesting source of inspiration too.
-guy.
3/17/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I love it..absolutely brilliant and insightful...
3/11/2004 c1 24katmonkey
Brilliant. I love the title!
*lime-girl*
2/1/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
*blinks* How'd I miss this one?
I like it. Great imagery, as always. Such an interesting way to put it.
-Jess
2/1/2004 c1 161chairmanmeow
Maybe that Jessica needs to read your bio first... *laughs* But, great haiku.
1/25/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
Interesting. Very powerful.
1/21/2004 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
Flame? Damn it, you need better self esteem. You're bloody divine.
1/17/2004 c1 100Keep it 100
I am a Christian, but nonetheless this was very original and a creative way to present it.
1/15/2004 c1 klipofffs
1this is re2ally 3good i 4like the 5title..1 im lac2tose in3telorant.. 4but i still li5ke mil1k th2ou3gh.. i 4get ga3ssy 4: )
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1/15/2004 c1 Corey
You're an idiot.
Just...idiot.
1/14/2004 c1 Jessica
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I wanna have your children.
That ROCKED. I love it.
-Jess
1/14/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Ah you have the most unique take on things *ever*. Such an awesome awesome play on words.
~lyv
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