3/25/2004 c2 Mebygr8
Heya, I think ur really good writer by the way. A word to the wise. Try not to use 'I' a lot. I have the same prob too and I'm trying to overcum it. I know its difficult since u are writing in first person. But try nevertheless.
Heya, I think ur really good writer by the way. A word to the wise. Try not to use 'I' a lot. I have the same prob too and I'm trying to overcum it. I know its difficult since u are writing in first person. But try nevertheless.
3/25/2004 c1 Mebygr8
Heya, thanx for reviewing 'Changing lanes.' i really appreciate it. As for the name of that story- its 'Where the pavement ends.' I know I shuda mailed u but I 've got this thing about revealing my id to anyone. So...
Heya, thanx for reviewing 'Changing lanes.' i really appreciate it. As for the name of that story- its 'Where the pavement ends.' I know I shuda mailed u but I 've got this thing about revealing my id to anyone. So...
1/25/2004 c1 124Tipped
funny! thatnx for the review...
time is just inchomprehendable so just dont try to think about it. ^_^
~missy~
funny! thatnx for the review...
time is just inchomprehendable so just dont try to think about it. ^_^
~missy~
1/17/2004 c1 8Niccy
I used to cox for my school rowing team (two years ago) but then quit 'cause I got too lazy. I loved the regattas but hated the training.. hehe.
Anyway, we never fell in (thank God! 'cause our river was FREEZING). But in the finals, the seat two's gate broke during the start and seat three's seat broke half-way through the race. Needless to say, the boat went everywhere and we lost the race.. it figures that the boat would screw up for the finals when it was completely fine for the semi and heats. I lost my voice by the end of the two days.
I'm getting off track.. just thought I'd review. ~d.fox
I used to cox for my school rowing team (two years ago) but then quit 'cause I got too lazy. I loved the regattas but hated the training.. hehe.
Anyway, we never fell in (thank God! 'cause our river was FREEZING). But in the finals, the seat two's gate broke during the start and seat three's seat broke half-way through the race. Needless to say, the boat went everywhere and we lost the race.. it figures that the boat would screw up for the finals when it was completely fine for the semi and heats. I lost my voice by the end of the two days.
I'm getting off track.. just thought I'd review. ~d.fox