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2MarielleRay
melissa is worse then i thought! ugh!*shudders* btw great chapter..some tension hanging in the air.
2MarielleRaymelissa is worse then i thought! ugh!*shudders* btw great chapter..some tension hanging in the air.
8/12/2004 c15 MarielleRay
YES! GO DEREK GO DEREK!haha. yay! ahem..*calms down* great chapter! just when i thought things were gona turn bad..u put derek right in there. yay! bye!
*secretly does happy dance* ^_^
YES! GO DEREK GO DEREK!haha. yay! ahem..*calms down* great chapter! just when i thought things were gona turn bad..u put derek right in there. yay! bye!
*secretly does happy dance* ^_^
8/12/2004 c14 MarielleRay
a guy who can shake it like shakira..wow! amazing chapter..im dreading the fact that max and melissa might succeed. *shudders*
a guy who can shake it like shakira..wow! amazing chapter..im dreading the fact that max and melissa might succeed. *shudders*
8/12/2004 c26 3Athene Saille
You're most welcome. Aww. Advice from kids is the best. They manage to see the world in a different view from everyone else. Wish Paul had a better older brother though.
3Athene SailleYou're most welcome. Aww. Advice from kids is the best. They manage to see the world in a different view from everyone else. Wish Paul had a better older brother though.
8/12/2004 c8 MarielleRay
aw Andreas is so sweet. to be honest i hated him like he was real. *blushes* hehe..but now i see his softer side. very cute. lol
aw Andreas is so sweet. to be honest i hated him like he was real. *blushes* hehe..but now i see his softer side. very cute. lol
8/12/2004 c6 MarielleRay
big coincidence. i was eating hershey's when i was reading this chapter. hehe. yum!^_^ love the chapter just as much!
big coincidence. i was eating hershey's when i was reading this chapter. hehe. yum!^_^ love the chapter just as much!
8/12/2004 c26 Serieve
Best story I've read in a long while. Thanks for providing the entertainment. ^^ I really enjoy it. Update soon, please?
Best story I've read in a long while. Thanks for providing the entertainment. ^^ I really enjoy it. Update soon, please?
8/12/2004 c26 58slowlydancingtothestars
PARTY! yep Ijoined the party long ago! lol well ty so much for the fast update and even though it was fast I liked this chapter. it proble wa soen of my favrotes of urs.
58slowlydancingtothestarsPARTY! yep Ijoined the party long ago! lol well ty so much for the fast update and even though it was fast I liked this chapter. it proble wa soen of my favrotes of urs.
8/12/2004 c26 Jen
Hey mandy..just got back from movies and just remembered I forgot to read and review! It was a great chapter..and dont you dare mention the car incident in chapter 27!
Hey mandy..just got back from movies and just remembered I forgot to read and review! It was a great chapter..and dont you dare mention the car incident in chapter 27!