
8/11/2004 c25
1Stevshals
Wow i spent all night reading this. My mom had to run off the computer. I could not wait to see what happened next. Nice job! This is really good. I love it! Update soon please!

Wow i spent all night reading this. My mom had to run off the computer. I could not wait to see what happened next. Nice job! This is really good. I love it! Update soon please!
8/11/2004 c25
8glitterjewele
OMG! WHAT A BLOODY F-CKING BASTARD! I HATE THAT JERK! I HATE HIM HATE HIM HATE HIM! ! ! *sucks in deep and semi-calming breath* seriously though, grr. i can't BELIEVE he did that to paul ~ paul's such an adorable little sweetheart! *cuddles him* *paul slaps her away and tells her not to baby him* aww, so cute. hehe. love how he's so mature for his age, kind of ~ like his whole semi-meditative monologue to poster-andreas; definitely showed a lot of comprehension and understanding, i thought. and yes, vicky is cool, too, i LOVE how she's going to get involved with getting kia and dre back together, that's such an awesome little twist because i was expecting her to be another obstacle and try to get dre for herself which would have been somewhat annoying and wow this is a really long runon sentence. but OMG you so HAVE to add hollie's squirrels into your fic! ! ! that would be da shizatz! if she's ambiguous about giving her consent, let me know and i'll be happy to hypnotize her for you. i don't do it very often, but you know, drastic times. ;P hahaha OH i am so bloody excited about the squirrel fic. *jumps up and down* and hey, AWESOME SUPER FAST UPDATE! ! ! i was like 'hm, no one updated today' (cause your story was at the top of the fav list yesterday night, too), and then i looked at the date and i was like 'wait . . .' lol. so yes, a most pleasant surprise and an excellent way to start the morning. fantabulous work chica! and tell pecan that, if she can get you to update again tomorrow, i'll let her play with my dress up clothes and marti-gras beads after all. *muahaha bribery . . . so sweet* :P great work!

OMG! WHAT A BLOODY F-CKING BASTARD! I HATE THAT JERK! I HATE HIM HATE HIM HATE HIM! ! ! *sucks in deep and semi-calming breath* seriously though, grr. i can't BELIEVE he did that to paul ~ paul's such an adorable little sweetheart! *cuddles him* *paul slaps her away and tells her not to baby him* aww, so cute. hehe. love how he's so mature for his age, kind of ~ like his whole semi-meditative monologue to poster-andreas; definitely showed a lot of comprehension and understanding, i thought. and yes, vicky is cool, too, i LOVE how she's going to get involved with getting kia and dre back together, that's such an awesome little twist because i was expecting her to be another obstacle and try to get dre for herself which would have been somewhat annoying and wow this is a really long runon sentence. but OMG you so HAVE to add hollie's squirrels into your fic! ! ! that would be da shizatz! if she's ambiguous about giving her consent, let me know and i'll be happy to hypnotize her for you. i don't do it very often, but you know, drastic times. ;P hahaha OH i am so bloody excited about the squirrel fic. *jumps up and down* and hey, AWESOME SUPER FAST UPDATE! ! ! i was like 'hm, no one updated today' (cause your story was at the top of the fav list yesterday night, too), and then i looked at the date and i was like 'wait . . .' lol. so yes, a most pleasant surprise and an excellent way to start the morning. fantabulous work chica! and tell pecan that, if she can get you to update again tomorrow, i'll let her play with my dress up clothes and marti-gras beads after all. *muahaha bribery . . . so sweet* :P great work!
8/11/2004 c24 Jessie
CHOOSE THE ANDREAS ROAD! NYAH! Um...yeah. I'm not the least bit excited. No, not me. XD Gah, Mandy, enough with plot twists, get them together already! But, I suppose the more difficulties in their way, the more satisfying it will be when they FINALLY get together.
CHOOSE THE ANDREAS ROAD! NYAH! Um...yeah. I'm not the least bit excited. No, not me. XD Gah, Mandy, enough with plot twists, get them together already! But, I suppose the more difficulties in their way, the more satisfying it will be when they FINALLY get together.
8/11/2004 c24
1psychedelic mishap
aww...pick andreas! stupid nerdy justin...
luv andreas...just thought you mite want to know...hehe
update soon!

aww...pick andreas! stupid nerdy justin...
luv andreas...just thought you mite want to know...hehe
update soon!
8/11/2004 c24 Guest
aw... shucks *twirls hair* u dedicated it to me? lil me? he... im honoured *giggle*... okkaayy.. now that ive done that lil routine ill get on with readin this storah :D and yeah, i do realise that this is actually supposed to be a space to review the story.. for some reason i always seem to get carried away and start talkin randomly bout stuff the author prob doesnt even wanna kno bout.. ah, right.. im reading...:)
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is she gonna break up with justin? is she is she is she? then u can have justin all sad and kiara feels bad and is all down but then andreas saves the day :D and then and then (haha i feel like that chinese lady in that ad for ashton kutchers movie "and then?" "no, thats all" "and then?" "thats all" "and then?" "NO! NO AND THEN" ahahah gotta love that ad..er yeah) where was i ? oh yeah.. and then they can both realise that they really truly belong with each other.. like romeo n juliet.. that movies aggravatin -_-
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haha love the line "he was liable as the nxt guy to giv u a ticket to the land of boredom" :P
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oh yeah.. what does justin lo0k like? 'part from brown eyes.. unless u describe it later in the chappie
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i love lotr.. specially the last mo0vie.. i rkn that was the best outta em, dontya agree? i especially love the leggolas elephant scene.. omg.. he is so co0l! he was like jumpin on the elephant.. while it was moving.. and he didnt fall off *Sigh*.. but i dont like orlando or nethin.. ahaha we had an adjudicator (for debatin) whos hair reminded me so much of orlandos curls.. that was funny.. i had somethin to lo0k at when the other team were dronin on n on bout extremeist political parties.. i guess i should pay attention when theyre talkin.. thatd b smart lol
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hey i just realised... ur storys in third person! (haha slow i know :P..o that rhymed!) thats co0l.. coz for some reason i dont really like thrid person as much as first person.. but that just goes to show how much ur storah ROCKS hehehehe
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oh yeah, im so glad u aint abandonin ur story.. thatd be.. tragic.. no more than tragic...i cant think of the word atm but im sure u have some idea of what i mean.. ahha im commentin on what u siad at the beginning of the chapter when im like halfway through a scene.. i really should stop gettin so distracted (doubt it lol):P
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o whats andreas up to? i hope he resorts to evil techniques thatd be funny to read.. tho i dunno what exactly hed do.. and he remembers her fave flowers! how sWeet! that reminds me (yeah.. here i go again lol).. have u seen a walk to remember? how sweet is it? if u havent.. theres this bit where the main guy gets a star named after the gal he likes (mandy moore).. how co0l would that be? omg.. so sweet ahha ive sweet heapsa times in the last few sentences..back to chappie
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hahahahahah i like what andreas said to victoria bout her fish in the sea coment.. interestin.. never really thought of it like that haha i love how u add all this kinda stuff in ur fab story :D
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oo0o victorias related to justin! (i think...).. or it could just be a massive coincidence.. but u wouldnt play with our minds now wouldya.. ur too nice *wink*..thats so co0l! and unexpected! w0ah
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o fight fight! well not yet.. but fight fight! :D
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oh..*sniff* no fight.. aha.. im a sucker for violence.. well not really.. but uh yeah..um, i cant really remember what i was gonna say lol
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o and the adjudiactor dude had a sparkly purple shirt ahhaha that also entertained me as well.. hed move in the light and his shirtd go sparkle sparkle ahaha cheap thrills :P
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ahh ah! i just realised i have a history assEssment.. pfat.. okay.. i gotta read read read.. quick quick quick
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its a love triangle! ehhe
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hahaha i love how andreas calls justin justypoo ahha
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oo u described justin.. gotta say andreas sounds hotter and co0ler :P
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co0l description of the decision she has to make- the roads n stuff
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o i wanna see justins bad side *Da da da dum*
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update so0n.. i hope jen bugs u heaps so ull update even quicker than she wanted hehe
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yah.. go the sappy happy endings! they rock :D thanks for promisin to finish it.. and when u do finish (*snif sniff*) and u have some time on ur hands.. could u check out ne of my stories? id love to have ur input :D thanks dude
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update son! :D *sings to tune of dwarves song* off to do the assignnment.. actually thats not the dwarves song.. thats a random nursery rhyme :P
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~ w1ngle55 ang3L ~
aw... shucks *twirls hair* u dedicated it to me? lil me? he... im honoured *giggle*... okkaayy.. now that ive done that lil routine ill get on with readin this storah :D and yeah, i do realise that this is actually supposed to be a space to review the story.. for some reason i always seem to get carried away and start talkin randomly bout stuff the author prob doesnt even wanna kno bout.. ah, right.. im reading...:)
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is she gonna break up with justin? is she is she is she? then u can have justin all sad and kiara feels bad and is all down but then andreas saves the day :D and then and then (haha i feel like that chinese lady in that ad for ashton kutchers movie "and then?" "no, thats all" "and then?" "thats all" "and then?" "NO! NO AND THEN" ahahah gotta love that ad..er yeah) where was i ? oh yeah.. and then they can both realise that they really truly belong with each other.. like romeo n juliet.. that movies aggravatin -_-
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haha love the line "he was liable as the nxt guy to giv u a ticket to the land of boredom" :P
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oh yeah.. what does justin lo0k like? 'part from brown eyes.. unless u describe it later in the chappie
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i love lotr.. specially the last mo0vie.. i rkn that was the best outta em, dontya agree? i especially love the leggolas elephant scene.. omg.. he is so co0l! he was like jumpin on the elephant.. while it was moving.. and he didnt fall off *Sigh*.. but i dont like orlando or nethin.. ahaha we had an adjudicator (for debatin) whos hair reminded me so much of orlandos curls.. that was funny.. i had somethin to lo0k at when the other team were dronin on n on bout extremeist political parties.. i guess i should pay attention when theyre talkin.. thatd b smart lol
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hey i just realised... ur storys in third person! (haha slow i know :P..o that rhymed!) thats co0l.. coz for some reason i dont really like thrid person as much as first person.. but that just goes to show how much ur storah ROCKS hehehehe
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oh yeah, im so glad u aint abandonin ur story.. thatd be.. tragic.. no more than tragic...i cant think of the word atm but im sure u have some idea of what i mean.. ahha im commentin on what u siad at the beginning of the chapter when im like halfway through a scene.. i really should stop gettin so distracted (doubt it lol):P
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o whats andreas up to? i hope he resorts to evil techniques thatd be funny to read.. tho i dunno what exactly hed do.. and he remembers her fave flowers! how sWeet! that reminds me (yeah.. here i go again lol).. have u seen a walk to remember? how sweet is it? if u havent.. theres this bit where the main guy gets a star named after the gal he likes (mandy moore).. how co0l would that be? omg.. so sweet ahha ive sweet heapsa times in the last few sentences..back to chappie
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hahahahahah i like what andreas said to victoria bout her fish in the sea coment.. interestin.. never really thought of it like that haha i love how u add all this kinda stuff in ur fab story :D
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oo0o victorias related to justin! (i think...).. or it could just be a massive coincidence.. but u wouldnt play with our minds now wouldya.. ur too nice *wink*..thats so co0l! and unexpected! w0ah
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o fight fight! well not yet.. but fight fight! :D
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oh..*sniff* no fight.. aha.. im a sucker for violence.. well not really.. but uh yeah..um, i cant really remember what i was gonna say lol
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o and the adjudiactor dude had a sparkly purple shirt ahhaha that also entertained me as well.. hed move in the light and his shirtd go sparkle sparkle ahaha cheap thrills :P
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ahh ah! i just realised i have a history assEssment.. pfat.. okay.. i gotta read read read.. quick quick quick
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its a love triangle! ehhe
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hahaha i love how andreas calls justin justypoo ahha
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oo u described justin.. gotta say andreas sounds hotter and co0ler :P
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co0l description of the decision she has to make- the roads n stuff
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o i wanna see justins bad side *Da da da dum*
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update so0n.. i hope jen bugs u heaps so ull update even quicker than she wanted hehe
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yah.. go the sappy happy endings! they rock :D thanks for promisin to finish it.. and when u do finish (*snif sniff*) and u have some time on ur hands.. could u check out ne of my stories? id love to have ur input :D thanks dude
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update son! :D *sings to tune of dwarves song* off to do the assignnment.. actually thats not the dwarves song.. thats a random nursery rhyme :P
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~ w1ngle55 ang3L ~
8/11/2004 c24
5quiksilva brumby
Great chapter! I loved the whole bit where Dre and Justin where fighting =P Hehe, so im sadistic =D I also thought it was cool with the whole coincidnce with justin/paul/victoria/andreas. V. clever =D Keep writing, and please keep reading my story! You could always review *hint hint* Heehehe. newayz, i siting here waiting for the next chapter! *leaps around* Keep writing gurl,
luv ~brumby~xx
P.S. You should read blak-pearls story, its so funny. She's Pico in my story =)

Great chapter! I loved the whole bit where Dre and Justin where fighting =P Hehe, so im sadistic =D I also thought it was cool with the whole coincidnce with justin/paul/victoria/andreas. V. clever =D Keep writing, and please keep reading my story! You could always review *hint hint* Heehehe. newayz, i siting here waiting for the next chapter! *leaps around* Keep writing gurl,
luv ~brumby~xx
P.S. You should read blak-pearls story, its so funny. She's Pico in my story =)
8/10/2004 c24 Mediator
Well thank god for a break-up soon :) I really don't like Justin besides what do they do on a date? Sit in front of a computer? That is a mildly good question btw.
Well thank god for a break-up soon :) I really don't like Justin besides what do they do on a date? Sit in front of a computer? That is a mildly good question btw.
8/10/2004 c24 ItalianQT
Good chapter! Can't wait to see how Andreas tries to win Kiara back! Update soon! : )
Good chapter! Can't wait to see how Andreas tries to win Kiara back! Update soon! : )
8/10/2004 c6 really-bad-egg
WoT! I luv this story! Your insults are amazing! Debate much? lol
" just sit there and make out with your male ego" ahahahahahaha (gotta use that sumtime ~_^)
I'm glad you decided to make them cross paths again, but i guess thats the whole point of the story, huh? lol I would ramble more but I have to finish the next couple of chapters!
Oh right I've got a story too so if you have time could u pwease R&R it? would be spiffy thnx! On to the next chappie!
WoT! I luv this story! Your insults are amazing! Debate much? lol
" just sit there and make out with your male ego" ahahahahahaha (gotta use that sumtime ~_^)
I'm glad you decided to make them cross paths again, but i guess thats the whole point of the story, huh? lol I would ramble more but I have to finish the next couple of chapters!
Oh right I've got a story too so if you have time could u pwease R&R it? would be spiffy thnx! On to the next chappie!
8/10/2004 c24 storiesmarket
ellO! it is, i ur favouritest reviwer in the world...PICO!
woot! i can see u leaping for joi rite now. omg u UPDATED! yes! *punches air happily* how come winglessangel gets to have this chap. dedicated to her? shez ma frend and...if she getz a dedication, I WANT ONE TOO! moohahahahahah. no, im not jealous...no sire...pah
anyway justin is such a groovy name. so is andreas, u no that? anyway, cool stuff, and nice twists! i never thought this story would go this far! anyway you totally rock doode and i'm loving this story!
cant wait to meet pauL!
luv
PICO! :D
ellO! it is, i ur favouritest reviwer in the world...PICO!
woot! i can see u leaping for joi rite now. omg u UPDATED! yes! *punches air happily* how come winglessangel gets to have this chap. dedicated to her? shez ma frend and...if she getz a dedication, I WANT ONE TOO! moohahahahahah. no, im not jealous...no sire...pah
anyway justin is such a groovy name. so is andreas, u no that? anyway, cool stuff, and nice twists! i never thought this story would go this far! anyway you totally rock doode and i'm loving this story!
cant wait to meet pauL!
luv
PICO! :D
8/10/2004 c24 H. M. Banson
Ooh... DAMN YOU! Meep!
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Okay, I'm just teasing. I don't actually want you damned (how ever would this get finished then? and who would i chat with about squirrels and pixies and running away from the infamous MIWLC? I mean, you're rather important, don'tcha know. ^-^ Plus you're so cool to talk with.)... but you're EVIL for making Justin so nice! Aie! I mean, if it was just the flower thing or the whole being understanding bout her trip and all, then I wouldn't care... but ack! He likes LotR! It's SO hard to hate someone who likes LotR! Lol.
What's that? He's got an evil side? YES! Whoo hoo! Yaysies! Oh, phew. Good. I want that to come out asap... cos I CAN'T like Dre's competition! That's like, the ultimate Andreas betrayal, and Dre is so awesome... Ack, I'd feel terrible.
I liked that the exhibit was included in this though... sigh, twas SO good! I *still* can't believe I got to hold Gandalf's sword... hehe! I *really* wanted to hold Andruil, but they weren't letting people do that... *sigh* ah well. I want to go back though, when Sean Astin comes to visit... that'd be SOO cool! Hehe! ^-^
Anyways... super duper chapter! I liked that Dre got the last word... oh yea! He's da bestest!
I liked Kia's road analogy too... GO WITH THE ANDREAS ROAD, KIA, GO WITH THE ANDREAS ROAD! Hehe, she should watch more movies, I think... the heroine never goes down the safe (aka Justin) side... they always go down the less certain path, that actually leads them to a better, happier, more exciting relationship... y'know, classic Hollywood stuff. ;oD
Aaw, I'm a favorite? Tee hee! That's pretty cool, cos you and glitterjewele are my favorites too! Heh.
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My squirrels saved me! The MIWLC had me cornered, and then Picco jumped on one of them, and Mira and Eddie took on the other and started biting with their sharp little teeth, and that way I was able to run around them and escape! They were great... my little heros! I gave them each extra bags of pixies after that... they deserved them! Sigh. I'm so very proud of my little squirrelies. Lol, I may send them to visit your squirrel clan sometime, because they want some friends... apparently I just don't cut it all the time. Ahem. Hey, glitterjewele, mind three more for a sleepover? *Picco and Mira put on their best little angel faces, while Eddie rubs his paws together, until Picco thwaps him on the head and Eddie puts on an angel face too* Hehe... their sweet little demons, really.
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Anywhoozle, GREAT CHAPTER and I'm glad you liked this exhibit... hehe, SO AWESOME! I can't wait for the next chapter of this AND for the Scorea fic AND for the squirrel story. Hehe... so much to look forward to! This is excellent!
Always,
~Hollie
*nudge nudge*
Oh, sorry...
Always,
~Hollie, Picco, Mira & Eddie
Happy now?
*nods*
Ooh... DAMN YOU! Meep!
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Okay, I'm just teasing. I don't actually want you damned (how ever would this get finished then? and who would i chat with about squirrels and pixies and running away from the infamous MIWLC? I mean, you're rather important, don'tcha know. ^-^ Plus you're so cool to talk with.)... but you're EVIL for making Justin so nice! Aie! I mean, if it was just the flower thing or the whole being understanding bout her trip and all, then I wouldn't care... but ack! He likes LotR! It's SO hard to hate someone who likes LotR! Lol.
What's that? He's got an evil side? YES! Whoo hoo! Yaysies! Oh, phew. Good. I want that to come out asap... cos I CAN'T like Dre's competition! That's like, the ultimate Andreas betrayal, and Dre is so awesome... Ack, I'd feel terrible.
I liked that the exhibit was included in this though... sigh, twas SO good! I *still* can't believe I got to hold Gandalf's sword... hehe! I *really* wanted to hold Andruil, but they weren't letting people do that... *sigh* ah well. I want to go back though, when Sean Astin comes to visit... that'd be SOO cool! Hehe! ^-^
Anyways... super duper chapter! I liked that Dre got the last word... oh yea! He's da bestest!
I liked Kia's road analogy too... GO WITH THE ANDREAS ROAD, KIA, GO WITH THE ANDREAS ROAD! Hehe, she should watch more movies, I think... the heroine never goes down the safe (aka Justin) side... they always go down the less certain path, that actually leads them to a better, happier, more exciting relationship... y'know, classic Hollywood stuff. ;oD
Aaw, I'm a favorite? Tee hee! That's pretty cool, cos you and glitterjewele are my favorites too! Heh.
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My squirrels saved me! The MIWLC had me cornered, and then Picco jumped on one of them, and Mira and Eddie took on the other and started biting with their sharp little teeth, and that way I was able to run around them and escape! They were great... my little heros! I gave them each extra bags of pixies after that... they deserved them! Sigh. I'm so very proud of my little squirrelies. Lol, I may send them to visit your squirrel clan sometime, because they want some friends... apparently I just don't cut it all the time. Ahem. Hey, glitterjewele, mind three more for a sleepover? *Picco and Mira put on their best little angel faces, while Eddie rubs his paws together, until Picco thwaps him on the head and Eddie puts on an angel face too* Hehe... their sweet little demons, really.
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Anywhoozle, GREAT CHAPTER and I'm glad you liked this exhibit... hehe, SO AWESOME! I can't wait for the next chapter of this AND for the Scorea fic AND for the squirrel story. Hehe... so much to look forward to! This is excellent!
Always,
~Hollie
*nudge nudge*
Oh, sorry...
Always,
~Hollie, Picco, Mira & Eddie
Happy now?
*nods*
8/10/2004 c24
20defiance-is-lovely
lovin it..was kiara here when they were arguing? i missed that...lol
anwyays cant wait for more!

lovin it..was kiara here when they were arguing? i missed that...lol
anwyays cant wait for more!
8/10/2004 c24
8glitterjewele
woot-woot! LET THE GAMES BEGIN! ! ! *flying squirrels go hurtling full speed toward a giant dong in the center of a ring between dre and justin* ahahaha, oh, this is going to be FUN. i'm glad you're going to give justin his evil side, because seriously, right now, i'm feeling rather sorry for him, and it would be much easier on me to be able to hate his kia-stealing guts without reservation. *smiles sweetly* loved the justin vs. dre path metaphor you used at the end, to show us kia's feelings ~ t'was very good. also, pecan has asked me to inform you that justin is a bimbo, because he tries to say that kia's never told him that her ex was andreas dalton before, when in fact she HAD told him, as evidenced by: "I ran into my ex boyfriend Andreas Dalton" toward the end of the first section. oh, hold on a second *pecan chatters furiously in her ear* ah yes, and she says to warn you that if you ever try to write without her again (seeing as she has the most common sense of everyone, and would have chewed out your ear for that, had she been present), she will not hesitate to drop skippy *directly* into a jumbo sized container of peanut butter, and refuse to help you give him a bath afterwards. *pecan nods decidedly and runs to pounce on pistachio, who is bouncing with wild abandon on the bed* . . . right. so now that that's over - lol. really loved this chapter, chica, t'was fantabulous! the squirrels have already gone through the first four suitcases of pixies, so i'll have to send them back to you soon for reinforcements and, obviously, so they can inspire you to write the next chapter, because i can't wait for it! ! ! AWESOME WORK! much kudos, chica mia. ;D

woot-woot! LET THE GAMES BEGIN! ! ! *flying squirrels go hurtling full speed toward a giant dong in the center of a ring between dre and justin* ahahaha, oh, this is going to be FUN. i'm glad you're going to give justin his evil side, because seriously, right now, i'm feeling rather sorry for him, and it would be much easier on me to be able to hate his kia-stealing guts without reservation. *smiles sweetly* loved the justin vs. dre path metaphor you used at the end, to show us kia's feelings ~ t'was very good. also, pecan has asked me to inform you that justin is a bimbo, because he tries to say that kia's never told him that her ex was andreas dalton before, when in fact she HAD told him, as evidenced by: "I ran into my ex boyfriend Andreas Dalton" toward the end of the first section. oh, hold on a second *pecan chatters furiously in her ear* ah yes, and she says to warn you that if you ever try to write without her again (seeing as she has the most common sense of everyone, and would have chewed out your ear for that, had she been present), she will not hesitate to drop skippy *directly* into a jumbo sized container of peanut butter, and refuse to help you give him a bath afterwards. *pecan nods decidedly and runs to pounce on pistachio, who is bouncing with wild abandon on the bed* . . . right. so now that that's over - lol. really loved this chapter, chica, t'was fantabulous! the squirrels have already gone through the first four suitcases of pixies, so i'll have to send them back to you soon for reinforcements and, obviously, so they can inspire you to write the next chapter, because i can't wait for it! ! ! AWESOME WORK! much kudos, chica mia. ;D
8/10/2004 c24 Jen
YAY!im happy that Justin is gonna be an evil bitch! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
YAY!im happy that Justin is gonna be an evil bitch! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!