for Line Crossing3/5/2005 c32 H. M. Banson
Aw.. now it's really over.. I might just cry..
This was a wonderful story, mon amie. I love how you tied in the title at the very end there. Twas perfect. The whole story was amazing.
Always,~Hollie
Aw.. now it's really over.. I might just cry..
This was a wonderful story, mon amie. I love how you tied in the title at the very end there. Twas perfect. The whole story was amazing.
Always,~Hollie
3/5/2005 c31 H. M. Banson
Wait for it.. wait for it..
AW!
That was so goddamn adorable! Heh, as I was reading the wedding sequence and such, I kept flashing back in my mind to all their earlier stuff.. the party where they met, the dog getting lost, all the street hockey... god, they are too perfect, and this story is absolutely AMAZING. A wonderful, humerous love story. I adore it. And I adore you, of course, the best author in all of fp! I would go on and on about how wonderful this is, but there's still another chapter to go! I leave it at I love everything about this story, and you totally rock. ^-^
Always,~Hols
Wait for it.. wait for it..
AW!
That was so goddamn adorable! Heh, as I was reading the wedding sequence and such, I kept flashing back in my mind to all their earlier stuff.. the party where they met, the dog getting lost, all the street hockey... god, they are too perfect, and this story is absolutely AMAZING. A wonderful, humerous love story. I adore it. And I adore you, of course, the best author in all of fp! I would go on and on about how wonderful this is, but there's still another chapter to go! I leave it at I love everything about this story, and you totally rock. ^-^
Always,~Hols
3/5/2005 c30 H. M. Banson
And the bastard is gone! Woot! But gr at him for hitting Kia! *squirrels make angry faces and hold pixie sticks menacingly* Yea, that's right justy-poo, you're gonna get a beat down if you hit her again!
Hmm, a smoothie sounds really good right now.. or some strawberries.. hehe, now I'm hungry.. I'll have to raid the fridge when I'm done reading. ^-^
Aaw, I'm sorry you were having stressful times when you wrote this.. hopefully that is over? Stress is never fun.. le sigh.. but luckily there is this wonderful place that a girl (and guys too, of course) can come to and read wonderful stories and forget about their lives for a short time.. sheesh, how have I survived this long without checking back here? It's a miracle, I do believe.
I love this story.. and I'm looking forward to reading your other stuff when I finish, because I see you do have a new story posted! Yay!
Always,~Hols
And the bastard is gone! Woot! But gr at him for hitting Kia! *squirrels make angry faces and hold pixie sticks menacingly* Yea, that's right justy-poo, you're gonna get a beat down if you hit her again!
Hmm, a smoothie sounds really good right now.. or some strawberries.. hehe, now I'm hungry.. I'll have to raid the fridge when I'm done reading. ^-^
Aaw, I'm sorry you were having stressful times when you wrote this.. hopefully that is over? Stress is never fun.. le sigh.. but luckily there is this wonderful place that a girl (and guys too, of course) can come to and read wonderful stories and forget about their lives for a short time.. sheesh, how have I survived this long without checking back here? It's a miracle, I do believe.
I love this story.. and I'm looking forward to reading your other stuff when I finish, because I see you do have a new story posted! Yay!
Always,~Hols
3/5/2005 c29 H. M. Banson
*hangs head in shame*
I am a TERRIBLE person.. I cannot believe I've allowed this much time to pass before coming here to read this, the most amazing story on all of fiction press..
I hope you can forgive my horrible-ness. Life has been something of a mess lately, and poor fp got lost in the shuffle. But I'm here now! Hopefully that's somewhat redeeming. ^-^
Sigh. I love Andreas. So much. I love Kia too.. but Dre is just the man. He totally is. Hehe, I need to find my own Andreas in a major way.. lol. ;o) Going out on the boat was such a sweet, romantic date. They are just so damn adorable together, I love it. And I can't wait for her to kick evil Justin's ass to the curb.. hehe. I'm so sweet, I know.
Okay, I'm off to read the next chapter of this amazingness.. I love how I still know exactly what's going on in this.. it's so easy to just slip right back into the story!
Always (despite her terrible absences),~Hollie
ps. Hehe, reading the updated Bio was *hysterical*.. I adored all the quotes, especially the one about men sweeping us off our feet then dropping us on our asses.. sigh, tis too true, but retains its humor nonetheless.
*hangs head in shame*
I am a TERRIBLE person.. I cannot believe I've allowed this much time to pass before coming here to read this, the most amazing story on all of fiction press..
I hope you can forgive my horrible-ness. Life has been something of a mess lately, and poor fp got lost in the shuffle. But I'm here now! Hopefully that's somewhat redeeming. ^-^
Sigh. I love Andreas. So much. I love Kia too.. but Dre is just the man. He totally is. Hehe, I need to find my own Andreas in a major way.. lol. ;o) Going out on the boat was such a sweet, romantic date. They are just so damn adorable together, I love it. And I can't wait for her to kick evil Justin's ass to the curb.. hehe. I'm so sweet, I know.
Okay, I'm off to read the next chapter of this amazingness.. I love how I still know exactly what's going on in this.. it's so easy to just slip right back into the story!
Always (despite her terrible absences),~Hollie
ps. Hehe, reading the updated Bio was *hysterical*.. I adored all the quotes, especially the one about men sweeping us off our feet then dropping us on our asses.. sigh, tis too true, but retains its humor nonetheless.
2/16/2005 c32 really
aww this was adorable. And the little dealy about the line crossing added a nice touch. Great ending to a fabulous story.
- really_bad_egg
aww this was adorable. And the little dealy about the line crossing added a nice touch. Great ending to a fabulous story.
- really_bad_egg
2/16/2005 c31 reallybadegg
this was a good wedding chapter, im just glad you didnt get into the nitty-gritty details. The justin thing was pretty unexpected... i truly thought he would stay an arse forever, but i guess not, eh?
Onto the epilogue now!
this was a good wedding chapter, im just glad you didnt get into the nitty-gritty details. The justin thing was pretty unexpected... i truly thought he would stay an arse forever, but i guess not, eh?
Onto the epilogue now!
2/5/2005 c32 
7tickle-me-pretty15
I read this from begining to end. I've had wonderful luaghs, and cries. I think you for this experience, and hope you continuing writing such wonderful stories.
7tickle-me-pretty15I read this from begining to end. I've had wonderful luaghs, and cries. I think you for this experience, and hope you continuing writing such wonderful stories.
1/30/2005 c32 6jukeboxsabotage
nice nice! lolx...i know this is like late and all coz you've already finished this fic..but...NICE! i lubbed it! well needless to say i luved Andreas...wakakkakak...and the epilogue is so "aw"...good job!
6jukeboxsabotagenice nice! lolx...i know this is like late and all coz you've already finished this fic..but...NICE! i lubbed it! well needless to say i luved Andreas...wakakkakak...and the epilogue is so "aw"...good job!
1/26/2005 c32 Jen
THE END! well...at least 4 now :)...once you explained the reason 4 the name "line crossings" it all made sense 2 me...good idea w/ the last paragraph...hope to be reading the sequal soon (yeah rite)...lol
THE END! well...at least 4 now :)...once you explained the reason 4 the name "line crossings" it all made sense 2 me...good idea w/ the last paragraph...hope to be reading the sequal soon (yeah rite)...lol
1/26/2005 c31 Jen
aww how cute...good job...and good luck on scorea!
aww how cute...good job...and good luck on scorea!
1/24/2005 c32 2w1ngle55-ang3L
THEY HAVE A DAUGHTER ! YAY ! aww.. that is so cute ! hehehehehe-man im full.. but thats so cool !-twins as well? omg.. so funky.. haha be cool if they were identical twins.. so annoying when parents dress kids the same.. its just.. urg.. like clones.. i rkn they should be like dressed differently.. but hey, whatever zips ur fly right. i like their kids names btw :)-aw nathan and kailey can be like the whole best friends falling in love cliche hahaha yeah i know.. kinda far ahead.. but hey :D-hahahaha she whacked dre in the face with icecream hahahaha thats classic:P-aw i love the ending with the whole description bout line crossing. damn. its over. now im sad. look what uve done ! evil :P oo i hope u put up a sequel :D ill be here to read it hehe. aw i get special props. ur too nice ;)-hmm.. cant wait to check out scorea and see what its like. review ya soon ! (hopefully :) )-~ am =)
2w1ngle55-ang3LTHEY HAVE A DAUGHTER ! YAY ! aww.. that is so cute ! hehehehehe-man im full.. but thats so cool !-twins as well? omg.. so funky.. haha be cool if they were identical twins.. so annoying when parents dress kids the same.. its just.. urg.. like clones.. i rkn they should be like dressed differently.. but hey, whatever zips ur fly right. i like their kids names btw :)-aw nathan and kailey can be like the whole best friends falling in love cliche hahaha yeah i know.. kinda far ahead.. but hey :D-hahahaha she whacked dre in the face with icecream hahahaha thats classic:P-aw i love the ending with the whole description bout line crossing. damn. its over. now im sad. look what uve done ! evil :P oo i hope u put up a sequel :D ill be here to read it hehe. aw i get special props. ur too nice ;)-hmm.. cant wait to check out scorea and see what its like. review ya soon ! (hopefully :) )-~ am =)
1/24/2005 c31 w1ngle55-ang3L
ITS THE WEDDING ! ITS THE WEDDING! *JUMPS AROUND* U UPDATED ! *SQUEALS*-damn hope my mum doesnt call me for lunch now.. i need to read.. read !-aw ! this is so cute ! they're married *wipes tear from eye*-AHHAHAHAHAHAAH aw ! thank u ! i feel so special.. im in here.. im in ur story. $5/ autograph thanks *wink* haha and the lemon meringue spilt on the dress, so something id do :P-uh oh.. justy poos here ! that cant be good.. well u said he wasnt evil.. but it still cant be good :( dont like him. he evil. omg. u have to see taking lives if u havent already.. its the best movie.. well one of the best. the best is remember the titans.. that is so freaking good ! but yes. taking lives.. ending rocks. anyway. totally irrelavant.. but hey ! :D-aw ! this chappie is so cute. they so have to have kids.. not that we'd know.. less like thats in the epilogue.. meh i dunno.. haha lil kiaras and andreas haha aw ! *squeals*-wow, justin has changed, neway, i g2g to lunch now haha gr8 timing.. so ill review the epilogue in a bit. ta ta !
ITS THE WEDDING ! ITS THE WEDDING! *JUMPS AROUND* U UPDATED ! *SQUEALS*-damn hope my mum doesnt call me for lunch now.. i need to read.. read !-aw ! this is so cute ! they're married *wipes tear from eye*-AHHAHAHAHAHAAH aw ! thank u ! i feel so special.. im in here.. im in ur story. $5/ autograph thanks *wink* haha and the lemon meringue spilt on the dress, so something id do :P-uh oh.. justy poos here ! that cant be good.. well u said he wasnt evil.. but it still cant be good :( dont like him. he evil. omg. u have to see taking lives if u havent already.. its the best movie.. well one of the best. the best is remember the titans.. that is so freaking good ! but yes. taking lives.. ending rocks. anyway. totally irrelavant.. but hey ! :D-aw ! this chappie is so cute. they so have to have kids.. not that we'd know.. less like thats in the epilogue.. meh i dunno.. haha lil kiaras and andreas haha aw ! *squeals*-wow, justin has changed, neway, i g2g to lunch now haha gr8 timing.. so ill review the epilogue in a bit. ta ta !
1/24/2005 c32 ItalianQT
Awesome story! I can't believe you finished it! I loved the epilogue! Good job! : )
Awesome story! I can't believe you finished it! I loved the epilogue! Good job! : )
1/23/2005 c32 10depressed-and-bored
WOOHOO! You finished. And it was AWESOME. YAY. well...uh...keep writing..cya
10depressed-and-boredWOOHOO! You finished. And it was AWESOME. YAY. well...uh...keep writing..cya