
1/23/2005 c32
7dreamerdoll
*sob* NO! It cant end!
ah, well, it was extremely wonderful and i really loved it...now i'll just have to come back and read it all the time. lol. i really loved it...i would be proud if i were you, too! im proud when i write a long chapter on fanfiction...i have a problem a lot of time in lengths...and i cant finish anything.
i was wondering how old Paul was...thanks for clearing it up. i was too lazy to go back and check how old he was before...*grins guiltily*...i never really thought about the title. i guess it just kinda fit with the story almost. *shrugs* it made sense. anyway, wonderful, amazing job with the whole thing! bubyez!~dreamerdoll

*sob* NO! It cant end!
ah, well, it was extremely wonderful and i really loved it...now i'll just have to come back and read it all the time. lol. i really loved it...i would be proud if i were you, too! im proud when i write a long chapter on fanfiction...i have a problem a lot of time in lengths...and i cant finish anything.
i was wondering how old Paul was...thanks for clearing it up. i was too lazy to go back and check how old he was before...*grins guiltily*...i never really thought about the title. i guess it just kinda fit with the story almost. *shrugs* it made sense. anyway, wonderful, amazing job with the whole thing! bubyez!~dreamerdoll
1/23/2005 c31 dreamerdoll
aw...this was so cute! i absolutely loved it! *grins* i cant wait for the epilogue...even if it DOES signal the end of the story *sob*
aw...this was so cute! i absolutely loved it! *grins* i cant wait for the epilogue...even if it DOES signal the end of the story *sob*
1/23/2005 c32 Bubble's Webb
Hey! I thought the ending was great! (It's quiksilva brumby btw - i got a new name) It really clicked with the rest of the story and it all ended neatly, which was great. Sort of tied it all up together nicely *grins* I've been following this story for so long now so it was great to read the end. Can't wait for the sequel!Great work dude!luv -micky x
Hey! I thought the ending was great! (It's quiksilva brumby btw - i got a new name) It really clicked with the rest of the story and it all ended neatly, which was great. Sort of tied it all up together nicely *grins* I've been following this story for so long now so it was great to read the end. Can't wait for the sequel!Great work dude!luv -micky x
1/22/2005 c32
5CrystalDusk
3 kids... and theyre not stressed. wow... that was a good story. and for once a decent ending. congrats. write one about paul!

3 kids... and theyre not stressed. wow... that was a good story. and for once a decent ending. congrats. write one about paul!
1/22/2005 c32 Emilea
hey. PLEASE write a sequel for their daughter and that boy next door! please! i love this story so if you so write a sequel i will update it!
hey. PLEASE write a sequel for their daughter and that boy next door! please! i love this story so if you so write a sequel i will update it!
1/22/2005 c32
2miss Jay
hAyo~! OMG! i really liked this, except i kind of forgot what had happened in the beginning,since the updates were a bit spaced... mEh, oh wellz.
This was great, and i'd just like to say that i'm very interested in the Kailey/Nathan thing. Can you please write a sequel about those two getting together? It'd be really awesome, and its totally set up here...
Anyways, please tell me if you decide to do it, my email is ... Thankyou! ~ Luv Jay

hAyo~! OMG! i really liked this, except i kind of forgot what had happened in the beginning,since the updates were a bit spaced... mEh, oh wellz.
This was great, and i'd just like to say that i'm very interested in the Kailey/Nathan thing. Can you please write a sequel about those two getting together? It'd be really awesome, and its totally set up here...
Anyways, please tell me if you decide to do it, my email is ... Thankyou! ~ Luv Jay
1/4/2005 c30
2paledaisy78
Hello this is an unofficial member of the Bum Me FOr Line Crossing Chapter Club. and now i am going to proceed to beg u for a chapter of Line Crossing. please please please please please please please please please...update!

Hello this is an unofficial member of the Bum Me FOr Line Crossing Chapter Club. and now i am going to proceed to beg u for a chapter of Line Crossing. please please please please please please please please please...update!
1/1/2005 c30 The Rejection
you know, she could've done that break-up a lot better. She was a bit rude, and that just made it worse. Maybe she shouldn't have flaunted it in his face, 'cause now I feel sorry for Justin.
you know, she could've done that break-up a lot better. She was a bit rude, and that just made it worse. Maybe she shouldn't have flaunted it in his face, 'cause now I feel sorry for Justin.
12/19/2004 c29
4Mr. Imagination
oh yea it was w1ngle55-ang3L not whateva i rote..ok i dont pay attention to names..so what? haha

oh yea it was w1ngle55-ang3L not whateva i rote..ok i dont pay attention to names..so what? haha
12/19/2004 c30 Mr. Imagination
Heya! i saw ur story pop up on my friends fav lists so often that i decided to read it myself and I LOVE YOUR STORY, you know, my story was going to have a similar concept to yours but now, i guess i have to change the whole planning of it dont it? *sigh* but i really like your story! I just wished i started reading this AFTER you've finished cus i hate reading stories that arent finished, i dont like the anticipation..ok im a impatient child but who cares? Oh if your wondering my friends are who have gotten my attion to your story, you could thank them, are pico, quick-silva brumby, wingl3ss-ang3l, i think those are the ones...neway i dont regreat reading yours! now u better update quickly, for those who have gotten my reviews know i can get...a bit...lets say..tempermatal with later updates...in easier words, i get fustrated! hahaa...GO CHINESE GIRLS! WE ALL ROCK (u can tell im chinese too eh?) I really dont apporve of reading stories with the perfect american bimbo image as the main character, it gets tiring, and in ur story u proved that chinese people can ROCK TOO! Boo ya! and i love guys with electric blue hair, they ROCK! keep on writting, i cant wait...once again...GO THE CHINESE, GO! :p
Heya! i saw ur story pop up on my friends fav lists so often that i decided to read it myself and I LOVE YOUR STORY, you know, my story was going to have a similar concept to yours but now, i guess i have to change the whole planning of it dont it? *sigh* but i really like your story! I just wished i started reading this AFTER you've finished cus i hate reading stories that arent finished, i dont like the anticipation..ok im a impatient child but who cares? Oh if your wondering my friends are who have gotten my attion to your story, you could thank them, are pico, quick-silva brumby, wingl3ss-ang3l, i think those are the ones...neway i dont regreat reading yours! now u better update quickly, for those who have gotten my reviews know i can get...a bit...lets say..tempermatal with later updates...in easier words, i get fustrated! hahaa...GO CHINESE GIRLS! WE ALL ROCK (u can tell im chinese too eh?) I really dont apporve of reading stories with the perfect american bimbo image as the main character, it gets tiring, and in ur story u proved that chinese people can ROCK TOO! Boo ya! and i love guys with electric blue hair, they ROCK! keep on writting, i cant wait...once again...GO THE CHINESE, GO! :p
11/29/2004 c30 wait what
update please? thx! im so glad that andreas and kiara are engaged =D yeah um dont do anything mean! so yeah um UPDATE!
update please? thx! im so glad that andreas and kiara are engaged =D yeah um dont do anything mean! so yeah um UPDATE!