for Line Crossing11/19/2004 c30 Faith
This chapter so rocks my face off! And PLEASE update soon! (I know I'm a broken record!)
This chapter so rocks my face off! And PLEASE update soon! (I know I'm a broken record!)
11/18/2004 c30 reallybadegg
Ello ello. Short and sweet this time huh? =P im glad she dumped him as soon as possible, he was bad from the beginning, a big mistake... but now i here hes coming back for more? hm id like to see what hes gonna do to further ruin their lives. Meheheh. Thanks for updating, and the shout out! Now that reminds me... hehehe my ficcie has gone to sleep for a while... i will get to it sooner or later, but im so busy, like you said life calls =) Keep it up, your almost there, the end of your lovely story... its so soon =( Anyways ive got to dash, so ill leave you with these words of wisdom "nothing ever came from a life that was a simple one, so lets all dance on the devil's dance floor" -floggin molly
Ello ello. Short and sweet this time huh? =P im glad she dumped him as soon as possible, he was bad from the beginning, a big mistake... but now i here hes coming back for more? hm id like to see what hes gonna do to further ruin their lives. Meheheh. Thanks for updating, and the shout out! Now that reminds me... hehehe my ficcie has gone to sleep for a while... i will get to it sooner or later, but im so busy, like you said life calls =) Keep it up, your almost there, the end of your lovely story... its so soon =( Anyways ive got to dash, so ill leave you with these words of wisdom "nothing ever came from a life that was a simple one, so lets all dance on the devil's dance floor" -floggin molly
11/14/2004 c30 love hound
Ahh! I absolutely love this. Andreas sounds just oh so hot. I love the green eyes and dark brown hair. My friend Danny has the same thing, except his hair is black. Its hot. Anyway, I love this story. I hope you update soon. I wanna know what happens. NOW! hehe. Im adding this to my favorite stories list.
Ahh! I absolutely love this. Andreas sounds just oh so hot. I love the green eyes and dark brown hair. My friend Danny has the same thing, except his hair is black. Its hot. Anyway, I love this story. I hope you update soon. I wanna know what happens. NOW! hehe. Im adding this to my favorite stories list.
11/14/2004 c30 
1psychedelic mishap
great chapter! glad that kiara FINALLY broke it off with justin.
anyways, must go and study as ive got exams tomorrow and would love to read an update after!
1psychedelic mishapgreat chapter! glad that kiara FINALLY broke it off with justin.
anyways, must go and study as ive got exams tomorrow and would love to read an update after!
11/12/2004 c30 ItalianQT
Justin is such a jerk!... I thought the break-up scene was fine...I hope you're gonna include the wedding or an epilogue! Update soon! : )
Justin is such a jerk!... I thought the break-up scene was fine...I hope you're gonna include the wedding or an epilogue! Update soon! : )
11/11/2004 c30 writtenreality
yay indeed! Stupid Justin..and he's so mean.. Can't wait for the next chapter!
yay indeed! Stupid Justin..and he's so mean.. Can't wait for the next chapter!
11/11/2004 c30 dreamerdoll
SEQUEL? DID YOU JUST SAY SEQUEL?
*SQUEALS* kewlies! is it out yet? whens it gonna be out? whats it gonna be about?
You are my new favorite author on this site! this is soo kewl!
I cant wait to see what happens with justin...he is such a freak...he deserves whatever comes to him...as long as its bad, that is. I hate that little twerp! he doesnt deserve to breathe the air ANdreas breathes!
that didnt make sense...but i'm hyper...mention the word "sequel" and I go psycho on you...
Anyway, great chappie, and i cant wait to see what happens! *Squeal* I hope you update soon...but if you cant, its understandable...anyway, bubyes!
~dreamerdoll
SEQUEL? DID YOU JUST SAY SEQUEL?
*SQUEALS* kewlies! is it out yet? whens it gonna be out? whats it gonna be about?
You are my new favorite author on this site! this is soo kewl!
I cant wait to see what happens with justin...he is such a freak...he deserves whatever comes to him...as long as its bad, that is. I hate that little twerp! he doesnt deserve to breathe the air ANdreas breathes!
that didnt make sense...but i'm hyper...mention the word "sequel" and I go psycho on you...
Anyway, great chappie, and i cant wait to see what happens! *Squeal* I hope you update soon...but if you cant, its understandable...anyway, bubyes!
~dreamerdoll
11/11/2004 c30 16AppLEaves
God...What happened to Melissa, the queen bitch? I loved her compare-his-basketball-tactics-with-his-bedding-abilities...is she going to appear again? Anyway, REALLY good story this is going on my Favorites Stories list after I finish this review which would be now.
16AppLEavesGod...What happened to Melissa, the queen bitch? I loved her compare-his-basketball-tactics-with-his-bedding-abilities...is she going to appear again? Anyway, REALLY good story this is going on my Favorites Stories list after I finish this review which would be now.
11/11/2004 c30 8glitterjewele
*cowers in fear of carrot-wielding squirrels* lmao, damn you make me laugh like no other, chica. :P
great chapter! lol man, kiara has *no* tact when it comes to breaking up with someone . . . but we'll forgive her that one little fault, methinks. but omg, he SLAPPED her? what a f*cking sonofabitch! i actually almost felt semi-bad for him when she was going on and on about her engagement, but after that . . . he should've been arrested or something. THAT would've been fun. haha. *ehem* mmk then. nice update, looking forward to ze dramatic conclusion! ;)
8glitterjewele*cowers in fear of carrot-wielding squirrels* lmao, damn you make me laugh like no other, chica. :P
great chapter! lol man, kiara has *no* tact when it comes to breaking up with someone . . . but we'll forgive her that one little fault, methinks. but omg, he SLAPPED her? what a f*cking sonofabitch! i actually almost felt semi-bad for him when she was going on and on about her engagement, but after that . . . he should've been arrested or something. THAT would've been fun. haha. *ehem* mmk then. nice update, looking forward to ze dramatic conclusion! ;)
11/11/2004 c30 5CrystalDusk
justy-poo is so...so...i dono so what but something's not right about him. and im glad it's not the end of him! kia n dre cant have the whole ~*no more troubles now that the evil guys gone!*~ thing because that sucks. no trouble=no entertainment. i hate no entertainment! so this story is very good! keep it up
5CrystalDuskjusty-poo is so...so...i dono so what but something's not right about him. and im glad it's not the end of him! kia n dre cant have the whole ~*no more troubles now that the evil guys gone!*~ thing because that sucks. no trouble=no entertainment. i hate no entertainment! so this story is very good! keep it up
11/10/2004 c30 2w1ngle55-ang3L
two more chappies? no! *Cries*
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YAY a sequel.. u rocks :D
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oo its thundering outside.. dontcha love thunderstorms?
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o yay :D she aint wastin her breath on justin, cuttin straight to the point hehehehe.. finally she breaks up with him :P
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JUSTIN SUCKS *growls* stupid loserish loser geek who slapped kiara!
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oh phew, nothin happened :D go kiara.. wootage, now they can live happily eveer after :D:D
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meh, another appearance of 'dearest' justy-poo.. in the words of.. someone... just dandy! :D
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haha, u gots fast net at school.. im jealous :P all our IT ppl do is watch porno all day.. i swear! lol and yeah, i hope this review doesnt delete itself.. ill copy it into a word document b4 i press submit review just in case.. oo ya wanna kno my pearls of wisdom?.. yes?... goodo ;) haha.. "just in case can save the world" *bows to ur thunderous applause*.. yes, i thought it quite wise too :P
and yay.. the pie and the character am :D ehehhehehe.. lemon meringue pie plz :P still got a cravin for that and its been how long hahaha
keep up the fab work with this story dude, cant wait til ya update (nufin new there :P)
- am
2w1ngle55-ang3Ltwo more chappies? no! *Cries*
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YAY a sequel.. u rocks :D
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oo its thundering outside.. dontcha love thunderstorms?
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o yay :D she aint wastin her breath on justin, cuttin straight to the point hehehehe.. finally she breaks up with him :P
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JUSTIN SUCKS *growls* stupid loserish loser geek who slapped kiara!
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oh phew, nothin happened :D go kiara.. wootage, now they can live happily eveer after :D:D
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meh, another appearance of 'dearest' justy-poo.. in the words of.. someone... just dandy! :D
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haha, u gots fast net at school.. im jealous :P all our IT ppl do is watch porno all day.. i swear! lol and yeah, i hope this review doesnt delete itself.. ill copy it into a word document b4 i press submit review just in case.. oo ya wanna kno my pearls of wisdom?.. yes?... goodo ;) haha.. "just in case can save the world" *bows to ur thunderous applause*.. yes, i thought it quite wise too :P
and yay.. the pie and the character am :D ehehhehehe.. lemon meringue pie plz :P still got a cravin for that and its been how long hahaha
keep up the fab work with this story dude, cant wait til ya update (nufin new there :P)
- am
10/30/2004 c29 19Sammi-Rose
This story is the sweetest love story I've ever read besides another slash story, but this is straight love and it's a different catagory. This story is so awesome. My heart almost stopped because I actually thought Andreas was dead! I can't wait for another chapter!
19Sammi-RoseThis story is the sweetest love story I've ever read besides another slash story, but this is straight love and it's a different catagory. This story is so awesome. My heart almost stopped because I actually thought Andreas was dead! I can't wait for another chapter!