for Line Crossing10/24/2004 c29 really-bad-egg
hey, its been a while, eh? This chapter was cute something to appease the readers until the next one the "break up with justin". I hope you make it just a tad dramatic =P This is actually the first time in on fictionpress since the last time I updated my story, which reminds me... lol Anyways catch ya later, update as soon as possible!
~Manda
hey, its been a while, eh? This chapter was cute something to appease the readers until the next one the "break up with justin". I hope you make it just a tad dramatic =P This is actually the first time in on fictionpress since the last time I updated my story, which reminds me... lol Anyways catch ya later, update as soon as possible!
~Manda
10/23/2004 c29 
1psychedelic mishap
that was a great chapter!
hope the break up with *justy-poo* doesn't get too severe...it's not going to get physical..is it?
andreas...so sweet...*goofy grin*
hehe..hope you can write more and update soon!
1psychedelic mishapthat was a great chapter!
hope the break up with *justy-poo* doesn't get too severe...it's not going to get physical..is it?
andreas...so sweet...*goofy grin*
hehe..hope you can write more and update soon!
10/21/2004 c29 faith
awesome yet again! =D cant wait until you update! and PLEASE update soon!
awesome yet again! =D cant wait until you update! and PLEASE update soon!
10/21/2004 c29 ItalianQT
Cute chapter! Looking forward to when Kiara finally breaks up with Justin! Update soon! : )
Cute chapter! Looking forward to when Kiara finally breaks up with Justin! Update soon! : )
10/19/2004 c29 8glitterjewele
YAY! THE NEW UPDATE IS HERE! *dances* lol aw, such a cute little chappie, chica, i loved it. of course, i would have loved anything after being held so long in suspense, but have read through your uber-long list of excuses, and having a new chapter before me at this moment, i think i'll be able to forgive you eventually. ;P hehe oh i am looking forward to the lovely break-up scene with justin. can they humiliate him? like push him off a bridge into a really yucky puddle of mud and dog doo-doo? *smiles sweetly* ehem. alright i'll shuddup now. great update!
8glitterjeweleYAY! THE NEW UPDATE IS HERE! *dances* lol aw, such a cute little chappie, chica, i loved it. of course, i would have loved anything after being held so long in suspense, but have read through your uber-long list of excuses, and having a new chapter before me at this moment, i think i'll be able to forgive you eventually. ;P hehe oh i am looking forward to the lovely break-up scene with justin. can they humiliate him? like push him off a bridge into a really yucky puddle of mud and dog doo-doo? *smiles sweetly* ehem. alright i'll shuddup now. great update!
10/19/2004 c29 2w1ngle55-ang3L
dont u just hate school internets? well i do.. as ive prob told u countless times b4.. but hey.. i ramble and im entitled to repeat myself :D neway.. heres the story haha kno ur lookin forward to this..:P.. well *clears throat* i was in commerce bein bored (nothin new) and so i decided to chek my favs list.. and VOILA one of my fav stories ever (urs.. which is why its on my favs list. i mean.. if i didnt like it.. it wouldnt be there.. well.. unless.. actually yeah.. hmm.. movin on) updated.. so i was all happy and i read it.. and i reviewed as i went along.. and then i pressed submit review or watever that button sez.. yeah submit review.. and POOF.. it gives some gay reason about an overload and mehpft... my entire review was gone.. and twas very long and interesting (like all my reviews *wink*:P) as well. so yeah. thats why this review has nothing to do with the chappie.. jus a whole lot of me complainin ehehehhe. yes, so.. i really cbb to go back adn write all my comments.. but i cant wait to see justins reaction.. or read his reaction haha.. when kiara breaks up with him.. hehehehe *rubs hands eagerly*.. okie.. well.. ihope ur work eases off a bit so u can update :D and itd be v v v v v good if u updated quicker than last time.. not that im complaining...coz u updated.. and c'est bon! ehhehe.. oh god.. that reminds me i have yearlies soon.. and french exams.. ick.. dunno what convinced me to choose the subject. oh well. ill shuttup now and go bug my friends online instead of u.. which ur prob v. pleased about :P so on a parting note.. update soon :D (i hope i didnt offend u with the whole thing bout updatin earlier.. i didnt mean it in a rude way :( )
- am
p.s. cant wait for their wedding :D:D hehe
2w1ngle55-ang3Ldont u just hate school internets? well i do.. as ive prob told u countless times b4.. but hey.. i ramble and im entitled to repeat myself :D neway.. heres the story haha kno ur lookin forward to this..:P.. well *clears throat* i was in commerce bein bored (nothin new) and so i decided to chek my favs list.. and VOILA one of my fav stories ever (urs.. which is why its on my favs list. i mean.. if i didnt like it.. it wouldnt be there.. well.. unless.. actually yeah.. hmm.. movin on) updated.. so i was all happy and i read it.. and i reviewed as i went along.. and then i pressed submit review or watever that button sez.. yeah submit review.. and POOF.. it gives some gay reason about an overload and mehpft... my entire review was gone.. and twas very long and interesting (like all my reviews *wink*:P) as well. so yeah. thats why this review has nothing to do with the chappie.. jus a whole lot of me complainin ehehehhe. yes, so.. i really cbb to go back adn write all my comments.. but i cant wait to see justins reaction.. or read his reaction haha.. when kiara breaks up with him.. hehehehe *rubs hands eagerly*.. okie.. well.. ihope ur work eases off a bit so u can update :D and itd be v v v v v good if u updated quicker than last time.. not that im complaining...coz u updated.. and c'est bon! ehhehe.. oh god.. that reminds me i have yearlies soon.. and french exams.. ick.. dunno what convinced me to choose the subject. oh well. ill shuttup now and go bug my friends online instead of u.. which ur prob v. pleased about :P so on a parting note.. update soon :D (i hope i didnt offend u with the whole thing bout updatin earlier.. i didnt mean it in a rude way :( )
- am
p.s. cant wait for their wedding :D:D hehe
10/18/2004 c29 5CrystalDusk
woah dude they havent broken up yet? justin n kia i mean? ok thats way harsh... can u imagine the conversation? ~*justin im SO sorry i have to break up with you! you see my good friend Andreas? that one you were going to fight with? well he kind of proposed to me and i kind of accepted...*~ o yeah i so look forward to this! lots of hissy fits! kool. update soon. dont make me wait
5CrystalDuskwoah dude they havent broken up yet? justin n kia i mean? ok thats way harsh... can u imagine the conversation? ~*justin im SO sorry i have to break up with you! you see my good friend Andreas? that one you were going to fight with? well he kind of proposed to me and i kind of accepted...*~ o yeah i so look forward to this! lots of hissy fits! kool. update soon. dont make me wait
10/18/2004 c29 writtenreality
ooh.. can't wait till she breaks up with Justin.. then GET HER BACK TOGETHER WITH ANDREAS! Hehe.. no thats just whati want to happen.. update again soon! Great chapter!
xox
carmen
ooh.. can't wait till she breaks up with Justin.. then GET HER BACK TOGETHER WITH ANDREAS! Hehe.. no thats just whati want to happen.. update again soon! Great chapter!
xox
carmen
10/17/2004 c29 dreamerdoll-is-to-lazy-to-log-in
this is so good! andreas is so sweet...i cant wait to read more!
this is so good! andreas is so sweet...i cant wait to read more!
10/17/2004 c28 28child's play
Encore, encore.
I can't wait for an update.
Splendid drawing out of their characters.
28child's playEncore, encore.
I can't wait for an update.
Splendid drawing out of their characters.
9/29/2004 c28 2miss Jay
OMG! Totallyhave to update this\! There is no way you could have killed off andreas... i mean, i would have DIED!hahahaha... newaiz, this is really really good, you totallyneed to get them together, ASAP!
2miss JayOMG! Totallyhave to update this\! There is no way you could have killed off andreas... i mean, i would have DIED!hahahaha... newaiz, this is really really good, you totallyneed to get them together, ASAP!
9/18/2004 c28 writtenreality
Wow.. i just spent the past hour or so reading your story and i love it! It is so amazingly brilliant! Ilove all your characters and your plot and the way you write.. It's so sweet.. Please update soon! Oh, and sorry i didn't review the other chapters- too busy reading :) xox me
Wow.. i just spent the past hour or so reading your story and i love it! It is so amazingly brilliant! Ilove all your characters and your plot and the way you write.. It's so sweet.. Please update soon! Oh, and sorry i didn't review the other chapters- too busy reading :) xox me
9/9/2004 c28 7dreamerdoll
OMG! this is soosoosoosoosoosoo wonderful! i love it sososososososo much! it was so amazing!
*collecting myself* I absolutely love 'Dre. He's soo great. And cute. And amazing. And talented...anyway. Please update very very very soon? You are going to add more, right? It's so wonderful!
Bubyes!
~dreamerdoll
PS: do you read Tamora Pierce?
7dreamerdollOMG! this is soosoosoosoosoosoo wonderful! i love it sososososososo much! it was so amazing!
*collecting myself* I absolutely love 'Dre. He's soo great. And cute. And amazing. And talented...anyway. Please update very very very soon? You are going to add more, right? It's so wonderful!
Bubyes!
~dreamerdoll
PS: do you read Tamora Pierce?