for Line Crossing9/7/2004 c28 storiesmarket
oi, i reviewed the last chapter and I DIDN'T GET ANY REPLY! *CRIES AND WAILS*
i knew u secretly didn't like me *sniff*
lol jk
anyway gr8 chapter. i finally got round to reading it. been very busy. but its great! finally everyting is all hunky dory! YES! i love this chapter it is so sweet! i can't wait till justin gets his arse kicked. DIE DIE DIE. ok
rite i'll b going now. lotsa love
pico
oi, i reviewed the last chapter and I DIDN'T GET ANY REPLY! *CRIES AND WAILS*
i knew u secretly didn't like me *sniff*
lol jk
anyway gr8 chapter. i finally got round to reading it. been very busy. but its great! finally everyting is all hunky dory! YES! i love this chapter it is so sweet! i can't wait till justin gets his arse kicked. DIE DIE DIE. ok
rite i'll b going now. lotsa love
pico
9/1/2004 c28 really-bad-egg
Yes his ass kicking was quite satisfactory *two thumbs up* and so was the break up, and they are getting married! Alot happens in this one, I cant wait to see what happens in the next =D As per usual thnx muchly for your review, i love getting them. I could talk foreva but I have hwk to do, so lucky for you, I have to shut up =P ttfn!
Yes his ass kicking was quite satisfactory *two thumbs up* and so was the break up, and they are getting married! Alot happens in this one, I cant wait to see what happens in the next =D As per usual thnx muchly for your review, i love getting them. I could talk foreva but I have hwk to do, so lucky for you, I have to shut up =P ttfn!
8/31/2004 c28 
22dwilivia
awesome story. i like Andreas a lot. haha. He really sounds like a greek god. *drools* oh yeah, i love Jesse McCartney too! *starts fantasising* ah... well... is this the last chapter? if it is, then it can't be! *meow* i don't want this to end! *ah* okok... i'm insane. sorry. well, hope you continue.
ps: you rawk!
22dwiliviaawesome story. i like Andreas a lot. haha. He really sounds like a greek god. *drools* oh yeah, i love Jesse McCartney too! *starts fantasising* ah... well... is this the last chapter? if it is, then it can't be! *meow* i don't want this to end! *ah* okok... i'm insane. sorry. well, hope you continue.
ps: you rawk!
8/30/2004 c10 faith
YAY! their engaged! cant wait for the next chapter!
YAY! their engaged! cant wait for the next chapter!
8/29/2004 c28 ItalianQT
Aw...They're engaged! About time! Now i hope everything goes well when Kiara breaks up with Justin! Update soon! : )
Aw...They're engaged! About time! Now i hope everything goes well when Kiara breaks up with Justin! Update soon! : )
8/29/2004 c28 lilsakura
Wow! Awesome Story! It's been on my mind ever since i started reading it, forcing me to drop whatever i was doing, rush up to the computer and continue reading. Literally. Anyways, great story, update soon, and all thatjazz. :P Approx how many more chappies do u think there will be until the stories over. J/w...(just wondering)
Wow! Awesome Story! It's been on my mind ever since i started reading it, forcing me to drop whatever i was doing, rush up to the computer and continue reading. Literally. Anyways, great story, update soon, and all thatjazz. :P Approx how many more chappies do u think there will be until the stories over. J/w...(just wondering)
8/29/2004 c28 Nimmi Mathew
He proposed to her yay! That was so sweet how she comes to him in the rain!And I'm so glad ur not gonna end it witout Paul!He's soo adorable and I agree 100%abt the Michael Phelps thing.And the next time ur gonna wirte abt Andre being killed in a dream or reality plz give us a warning! I nearly had a heart attack when I read it! And if not a prob. please update faster! Please Please Please!
He proposed to her yay! That was so sweet how she comes to him in the rain!And I'm so glad ur not gonna end it witout Paul!He's soo adorable and I agree 100%abt the Michael Phelps thing.And the next time ur gonna wirte abt Andre being killed in a dream or reality plz give us a warning! I nearly had a heart attack when I read it! And if not a prob. please update faster! Please Please Please!
8/26/2004 c28 The Rejection
That was... a sudden proposal. Gotta wonder how she can say yes... but she loves him, I guess. How cute.
That was... a sudden proposal. Gotta wonder how she can say yes... but she loves him, I guess. How cute.
8/26/2004 c28 complicatedlysimple
hi! There was a PROPOSAL! I'm so excited! I love the way you can feel the connection of Kia and Andreas through the story. And the way the story is progressing is interesting. I absolutely can't wait to find out Justin's reaction. *Shakes fist at horrible 'Justy-poo'* lol good luck on the french project and update as soon as possible! Pretty please? :-D
CoMpLiCaTeDLySiMpLe
hi! There was a PROPOSAL! I'm so excited! I love the way you can feel the connection of Kia and Andreas through the story. And the way the story is progressing is interesting. I absolutely can't wait to find out Justin's reaction. *Shakes fist at horrible 'Justy-poo'* lol good luck on the french project and update as soon as possible! Pretty please? :-D
CoMpLiCaTeDLySiMpLe
8/26/2004 c28 1psychedelic mishap
whohoo! luv ya!
there getting married! m-a-r-r-i-e-d!
YAY!
please update soon! cant wait to see justin get kicked out of the picture!
1psychedelic mishapwhohoo! luv ya!
there getting married! m-a-r-r-i-e-d!
YAY!
please update soon! cant wait to see justin get kicked out of the picture!
8/26/2004 c28 5CrystalDusk
ah sorry bout that demented review before...i was at some friends house and my parents were like first ~*nah lets stay a while longer!*~ then a second later ~*cmon cmon! we gotta go!*~ =S
anyhoo...this story's so sweet! they're getting married! is justin gonna chuck a spaz? i reckon he should! =D
by the way i reckon andreas has a weird way of showing affection...chucking a bouncy ball at her head? gee...id REALLY fall in love with the next guy who chucks bouncy balls at my head... i'll keep that in mind next time that happens.
paul is so cute! i love paul! can i have him? =) see i NEVER like little kids and now i want one! that's how much i love paul!
that whole ~*7yrs later*~ thing was a bit demented...i was lost for a while there. ok so im lost easily. but never mind i got it now! =D
wow... that's the longest review i've written so far! congrats.
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5CrystalDuskah sorry bout that demented review before...i was at some friends house and my parents were like first ~*nah lets stay a while longer!*~ then a second later ~*cmon cmon! we gotta go!*~ =S
anyhoo...this story's so sweet! they're getting married! is justin gonna chuck a spaz? i reckon he should! =D
by the way i reckon andreas has a weird way of showing affection...chucking a bouncy ball at her head? gee...id REALLY fall in love with the next guy who chucks bouncy balls at my head... i'll keep that in mind next time that happens.
paul is so cute! i love paul! can i have him? =) see i NEVER like little kids and now i want one! that's how much i love paul!
that whole ~*7yrs later*~ thing was a bit demented...i was lost for a while there. ok so im lost easily. but never mind i got it now! =D
wow... that's the longest review i've written so far! congrats.
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8/25/2004 c28 xiaobudian
aw! Tey're getting married! Hallelujah!
Luv u icytigerwarrior 4 getting them 2gether finally! It's about time!
Just hope Justy-poo won't intefere anymore.
aw! Tey're getting married! Hallelujah!
Luv u icytigerwarrior 4 getting them 2gether finally! It's about time!
Just hope Justy-poo won't intefere anymore.
8/25/2004 c9 The Rejection
Aww, Dre is so cute when he's being rebellious and trying to be funny. ^_^
Aww, Dre is so cute when he's being rebellious and trying to be funny. ^_^
8/25/2004 c4 The Rejection
Poor guy, he lost his dog!
I saw one mistake that you shoudl fix... " I mean, she did have to go to the same school as him that year..." you had a sudden change to first person there. It doesn't do you any good.
Other than that- sweet, entertaining, and oddly endearing. Yay vocab!
Poor guy, he lost his dog!
I saw one mistake that you shoudl fix... " I mean, she did have to go to the same school as him that year..." you had a sudden change to first person there. It doesn't do you any good.
Other than that- sweet, entertaining, and oddly endearing. Yay vocab!
8/25/2004 c2 The Rejection
While predictable, that was still absoluely awsometastic. I love these little love/ hate relationships. They're so much fun.
While predictable, that was still absoluely awsometastic. I love these little love/ hate relationships. They're so much fun.