for Reflections3/2/2004 c1 Kisaya
you really did a good job on setting a layer of depression on your words which added a nice effect to your piece. once again you do a great job of projecting you feelings and it makes a strong impression on the reader - well to me at least.
wonderful job and keep on with the poetry.
you really did a good job on setting a layer of depression on your words which added a nice effect to your piece. once again you do a great job of projecting you feelings and it makes a strong impression on the reader - well to me at least.
wonderful job and keep on with the poetry.
1/15/2004 c1 
15BecomingMyself
Nice and soft way to express the loneliness that is tangible throughout your poem...
I recognize the way you write and I even see you use some same expressions I would; so... to me an easy to understand poem for the way it is written.
Nice poem!
Write on...
15BecomingMyselfNice and soft way to express the loneliness that is tangible throughout your poem...
I recognize the way you write and I even see you use some same expressions I would; so... to me an easy to understand poem for the way it is written.
Nice poem!
Write on...