for the bride's litany, or where we are going 910/21/2004 c1 
9Coeur Mysterieux
That was SO good! I'm usually not a fan of poetry, but that was ReAlLy good! Your style is extremely unique. I wish I could write poetry like you!
~The Wilted Rose
9Coeur MysterieuxThat was SO good! I'm usually not a fan of poetry, but that was ReAlLy good! Your style is extremely unique. I wish I could write poetry like you!
~The Wilted Rose
4/12/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
i just went to new york to...
lovely poem. i love your style. it has so much meat to it, and yet at the same time it maintains a bleak sort of beauty. great job.
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetryi just went to new york to...
lovely poem. i love your style. it has so much meat to it, and yet at the same time it maintains a bleak sort of beauty. great job.
~lyv
3/1/2004 c1 185sweetadeline
This piece is absolutely stunning..really. I'm having trouble putting it into words- that means something. I would greatly value your opinion. I'll be reading more of your work. Thank you for the review.
185sweetadelineThis piece is absolutely stunning..really. I'm having trouble putting it into words- that means something. I would greatly value your opinion. I'll be reading more of your work. Thank you for the review.
1/18/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
Wow. This is really powerful. I think that this is the most thought provoking thing that I have read on fictionpress yet. I love the desribing words that you use, they are very gruesome, almost. I love the idea that you had, and how you developed it. Keep up the good work!
14arbysauce93Wow. This is really powerful. I think that this is the most thought provoking thing that I have read on fictionpress yet. I love the desribing words that you use, they are very gruesome, almost. I love the idea that you had, and how you developed it. Keep up the good work!
1/15/2004 c1 36obsidian katana
great poem. well written, beautiful, good diction and imagery, and this piece has a nice flow to it. i like this a lot. nice use of capitalization in the last line as well. good job. keep writing!
36obsidian katanagreat poem. well written, beautiful, good diction and imagery, and this piece has a nice flow to it. i like this a lot. nice use of capitalization in the last line as well. good job. keep writing!