5/9/2004 c1 14Willow Elandria
ohh, sad... interesting perspective, though.
seems a little more prose-ish than poetry. the last few lines are my favorites.
ohh, sad... interesting perspective, though.
seems a little more prose-ish than poetry. the last few lines are my favorites.
2/15/2004 c1 12restless-wandering
oh, sad... Beautiful use of words though to describe those last minutes... ~ponders~
oh, sad... Beautiful use of words though to describe those last minutes... ~ponders~
1/22/2004 c1 Persn A
0.o Woah. That's deep-real deep. THe rhyming patterns are so good that it's not noticable, but it adds a subtle touch... I likes it!
0.o Woah. That's deep-real deep. THe rhyming patterns are so good that it's not noticable, but it adds a subtle touch... I likes it!