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3/9/2004 c1 64not sure yet
hm, very direct and to the point, muchly enjoyed it, excellent wording, sounds really good, nicely done
2/1/2004 c1 25Arutha
Hm, that one is a bit sad... yet indignant to the whole situation at the same time. It's almost as if the narrator (perhaps yourself, if this was written about you) accepts all this. She has given away her soul for the desires of flesh and she seems at terms with it... if a bit appauled at the whole idea. Awesome poem. ;P
1/28/2004 c1 22Non-existent Puritanism
Very nice poem..good and understandable..
1/26/2004 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Cool. Like the ending, very strong and just. Thanks for the review.
Keep it up and do not falter.
1/23/2004 c1 11Pachelbel
Wow...that really is striking. I like how fluid and yet harsh it is.
1/22/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
I can see why you've very proud of this one. So, so well done that's all I have to say. -claps- ^-^
Jenna x
1/21/2004 c1 19Cannonball
very powerful stuff, the title's not that bad, once i got it, u know a lil slow, ni biggie, but i liketh
1/18/2004 c1 1Tear Drop Princess
That was a tad bit on the darker side...
1/16/2004 c1 236mezzie
wow talk about laying it out in the language (and i mean that in a good way)... the words you use give a definition to this work that would not exist otherwise, the use of words like slut, whore, bitch - if you didn't use them i don't think the point would get across the same at all, just how you feel about this soul stealing. so thanks for not holding back - sometimes it doesn't work to be polite and pretty. really good work.
mezzie

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