2/9/2004 c1 Winter's Roar
wow, great word use in this piece. I love you choice of the phrase "you could never hurt me", not you can't hurt me, you can never, you will never, but you could never. It's a powerful phrase, threatening and honest. "There can be blood/through there's no life", interesting concepts. There were several times when the poem seemed to contridict itself, which was rather confussing, but overall this was wonderfully written. It was like reading a dream or the words of not quite finished song. Hats off to you!
~ winter

1/16/2004 c1 27BluEyes1
sometimes that's how i feel, too...or at least what i let people believe...but anyway, great poem. loved it